Reviews for Electric Perfection
Coeast chapter 41 . 10/3
I ran across this story and...wow...just wow. I didn’t think I could handle the darkness (and it did get very dark) but you balanced it with the lighter scenes so well I never felt overwhelmed. Thank you!
JMilz chapter 15 . 2/16
How marvelously this is written. Truly, a masterpiece.
BlueTour chapter 41 . 10/21/2019
Well this was overwhelming amazing and i love it
shamione chapter 28 . 10/13/2019
I got to chapter 27 but I cant continue. I wasnt thrilled with Hermione having an eating disorder in the first place because it does seem rather random. The writing is decent but it actually feels too long. most of the paragraphs could have easily been shortened by 56 sentences and it wouldn't have changed a thing in the story. Also not enough trigger warnings for me.
exploring angel chapter 41 . 10/11/2019
I really enjoyed reading this and exploring the socio-economic consequences of the war on the wizarding world. Watching the characters was also especially fun as unlike the 19 years later, I doubt any of them came out of the war unscathed. Thank you for an incredible journey.
TakingFlight48 chapter 41 . 9/26/2019
Wow, what is there even to say. I stumbled upon this story and was a nervous to read at. I'm not sure why, but I felt as if it would be very loaded, and sometimes my mind needed less angsty and real emotions and more fluff.

However, I am so glad I talked myself into reading this, in about a day; I started last night. I am honored to have been able to read, empathize, follow along, rejoice,, cry and cringe and yell with every emotion you relayed and every chapter. I value, above all else, stories were Hermione is truly represented with the strength and intelligence and cunning that is woven throughout the entire series.

I just loved it, I hope that you write many many many more stories like this. I hope that I get to read them and enjoy them like I did this one. It was just so raw, her trauma and her pain and her relationships and the reactions of those around her and the reality of her being able to step outside of her torment her internal anguish long enough to continue to give more and more and more and the ability to give her a family in turn that not only respects her strengths but is there to patch up or just simply sit beside her holes and her cracks. It was truly beautiful. And the more I think about it, although the situation with Blaise was painful and traumatic, in reality your story felt so raw because everything about it is real there was no crazy magic or story lines or crazy outlandish plots, you took everyday moments both painful and joyful and turned them into the story and made us feel every moment because of it.

I will end this review now. Thank you again for your time and energy writing this!
pinkduck2587 chapter 41 . 9/21/2019
Wow. What a story. You could feel the rawness that they would have all felt, all if the trauma. I love that they found each other though. A perfect couple, Draco truly saved Hermione and they both had Harry's friendship too. Thank you.
reallyseaweed chapter 41 . 9/17/2019
the end. i like the story
reallyseaweed chapter 34 . 9/17/2019
their first time.
it's just weird that Harry shared bed with Hemione too.
reallyseaweed chapter 31 . 9/17/2019
ohhhh Harry
reallyseaweed chapter 30 . 9/17/2019
he asked her to be his girlfriend? yesss.
reallyseaweed chapter 27 . 9/17/2019
awwwe. they got their first kiss.
reallyseaweed chapter 25 . 9/17/2019
goshhhh. that is so not right, Harry bathed with hermione
reallyseaweed chapter 23 . 9/17/2019
awe.. Draco seemed OCC in this story. and Harry and Draco got on well quickly. love it.
and Ron. come on!
reallyseaweed chapter 21 . 9/17/2019
gosh... what happened to Blaise? why did he hate Hermione so much?
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