Glad to see this keeping up.

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Fantastic chapter!

Every so often i click on this story to see if you have improved beyond a sixth grade writing level and you seem to be devolving.

For the love of everything take some pride in your work and go over it at least once checking grammar before you post.

I could barely get through three chapters before I had to call it quits. This story is basically nothing but paragraph after paragraph of overlong dialogue among a few Harry Potter characters, with hardly any plot or coherence backing it up.

Waiting eagerly to reading more!

sorry but ron was in the right he has every right to complain about her, harry was even more of a jerk.

Why are these horribly written ranting stories increasing on ff?

I TRULY LOVE THIS STORY.

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Did you know you changed Harry's Mindscape between Chapters 3 and 8? In 3 it was well ordered, and then in 8, it was chaotic. Was that an aftereffect of Dumbledork trying to be in there?

Aside from that I'm loving this story and can't wait to see how Hermione and Harry's dynamic changes now that she's not cursed anymore.

Like this story line. Looking forward to reading more.

you're slipping back into unreadable monster-sized paragraphs again.

Guest its not bipolar the mental condition is anxiety when things get to be too much all at once a person with anxiety is withdrawn till their with someone that makes them feel safe.

Your premise is very good - what would happen if the teachers were competent? However, the story misses the mark rather badly. Now they are over reacting. Harry is just as outrageous as Hermione initially and now he's back to being a quivering mess? Which is it? Overconfident and super critical or ashamed, withdrawn and withdrawn seem to be our options. In the real world this might indicate a bi-polar disorder.