Reviews for To ask for more
amourdiamante chapter 5 . 6/12
Aww I love this story and how it explores their intimacy and how they’re both inexperience bumbling idiots about the whole thing it’s so endearing. And hot. YUP. Don’t forget the hot part.
vm232129 chapter 5 . 6/11
Really enjoyed this. One small gripe: please put the “o” back in “routine.” Plenty of them in this story after all.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/23/2019
Please update with a chapter 6. Would love to know his reaction to becoming a father.
Amelia Mariee chapter 5 . 11/29/2019
OoOh what was his reaction!?
Amelia Mariee chapter 2 . 11/29/2019
He is so sweet!
Merrow.in.the.Barrow chapter 5 . 11/16/2019
Very rarely do I find a story that's equal parts sweet and passionate, but here it is! I adored Christine and Erik's interactions and enjoyed watching their relationship develop through the love scenes (which were very well-written, by the way). The ending was cute and satisfying too :)
Lady L Shardlake chapter 5 . 11/8/2019
I loved it. Well done
Gabriezzu chapter 5 . 9/2/2019
Ugh, this is so amazing! I loved it!
It was so sweet and sad to see how their relationship had to progress at a turtle’s speed because of his lack of confidence and decades of touch starvation. Christine being so kind and understanding towards his needs was perfect, and I really liked the way both of them thought of the other’s comfort over their own. Really shows how they, specially Erik, matured! I loved to see how their relationship helped him grow as a person and he learned to take better care of himself. Simply lovely!
Oh, and the smut was simply fantastic. Absolutely beautiful! And what a cliffhanger of an ending! Had Erik not grown so much in the years of marriage they’ve had, I’d be worry, but I’m sure this new Erik can handle that!
Simply and absolutely beautiful!3
Guest chapter 5 . 7/20/2019
Lovely bit of smut. Tenderness and consideration all around makes for fun times. Thanks for writing.
Erika Dyer chapter 5 . 7/2/2019
I love this so much! The best phantom smut I've read for sure. Are you planning to continue with it? I would love to see Erik's reaction to her news, and how he copes with a baby.
RavenclawWeasel531 chapter 5 . 6/26/2019
OH DAMN! That was a twist
Kael chapter 5 . 6/24/2019
Ohoh i wonder how Erik will reacts~
You Are Love chapter 5 . 6/25/2019
I hope he doesn't ruin it
ilustrariane-the fic reader chapter 5 . 6/24/2019
damn i think this chapter is my favorite.
i love the hades/persephone reference! also 10/10 smut!
FilthyBonnet chapter 5 . 6/24/2019
This chapter was everything! Erik gaining so much confidence to finally consummate his marriage, write an opera, buy the opera, go out in public with his wife. That beautiful description of her dress, Erik's gall to bend her over her vanity, lift up that dress and take her right there; that was so hott and more arousing than all the other smut in the chapter because he was just so in control, dominate and confident in the move. I can't wait to watch him freak out over her being pregnant and ruin everything.
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