I was very sad when nessie died, then she was told she would live again and it made me happy. I love this story so much. I've been reading it all day. Keep going please you have great potential.

Interesting!

Hi there, I just found your story yesterday and it's the first fanfiction I've read in years. I love the premise, although the last few chapters were a little out there I am curious to see where you take the story in the future. I love the character development you have done with Nessie and I cannot wait to see where you go with this in the future. If you ever want an extra pair of eyes to look over a chapter or someone to bounce ideas off of feel free to send me a DM, I see a lot of potential in this.

Amazing chapter. The conversation between Nessie and Elizabeth was nice. I am so happy that Nessie will live aagin

fantastic chapter

Fantastic Chapter

Awesome chapter

Awesome! I loved it!

I'm so glad you came back to this story and I love the new twist! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for a great chapter.

I love we're the plot is going, this story is really good keep up the good work! But Please bring Nessi back I'm crying!

Go Nessie, get evil Jane.

Has Jane gone against the Volturi too to track down her brother?

Very good!

i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :)