| Reviews for An Ordinary Magical Couple |
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Hank1967 chapter 7 . 7/7 Excellent end to the story! While I personally wouldn't recommend dealing with any demons (nasty blighters they are), I did enjoy the rest of it. Glad to see Daphne assisting the trio with the Gringotts "break in" and with dispatching Nagini. Also glad to see Harry rescuing the girls from Carrow. And talk about a splitting headache; glad it was Peeves and not me cleaning up! Peeves reaction to Desdemona was great too! That last scene with grandpa Harry was precious. |
Hank1967 chapter 6 . 7/7 Excellent chapter! Loved the interlude at FFF. Great job with that! A calf names Harry was too funny! Enjoyed all of the Harry/Daphne time. Glad to see Harry pushing forward both with his responsibilities and with Daphne. |
Hank1967 chapter 5 . 7/7 Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry learning strategy from some of the best. Also glad to see Daphne actively watching out for him. Great job of puzzling around and through the canon. |
Hank1967 chapter 4 . 7/7 Excellent chapter! Love the reference of the knight receiving his lady's favor. Too cool that he took it with him through the maze. That was neat of Harry to deposit it somewhere safe, although if it were me, I'd probably always keep it with me... Great job! |
Hank1967 chapter 3 . 7/7 Excellent chapter! Love the symbolism of the chessboard. Glad to see Harry and Daphne getting closer and keeping up their clandestine meetings. |
Hank1967 chapter 2 . 7/6 Excellent chapter! Very enjoyable story. I like how you focus on Harry/Daphne and just let the canon slide to the background. Also glad to see that Harry finally followed Daphne's advice (or was that an untimatum?) ;-) |
Hank1967 chapter 1 . 7/6 Very cute story! Enjoy seeing Harry and Daphne at eleven and starting a friendship. Glad to see Harry looking out for Daphne. He's definitely the Gryffindor. Also glad to see his Slytherin side coming out, too. Harry has caught Draco between a rock and a hard place. Draco can't own up to what happened to his wand and now his wand won't want to work as well for him and definitely won't work against Harry Potter. Too funny! Great job! |
mrfresh chapter 7 . 6/28 Thanks for sharing this. Your writing is very good and you’ve made a very believable plot. I enjoyed reading this. There is something magical just in the name of Flinty Fields Farm... |
K chapter 7 . 5/23 A nice variation on the original. Very readable. |
astolfo83 chapter 7 . 5/13 Loved this on so many levels. Thanks for sharing! |
G Fawkes chapter 1 . 5/7 I just finished "Merit and Inheritance", and it was one of my favorites, ever. I'm going in to this one with a lot of goodwill, but also a high bar has been set. I expected better than this first bit... ( After the 'working knowledge of canon' comment, I'm compelled to point out your line) "a few days later..." Something about Ron and Harry. Harry went to Diagon Alley literally on his birthday, July 31. He met Ron on September first. No matter what day it is, it is hardly "a few days later". |
muffdyvr chapter 1 . 3/11 this story is boring as fuck.. fuck "how i met your mother". that sitcom sucks. |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 7 . 2/23 Really good fic. Thank you for writing it. |
Ghostwriter71 chapter 1 . 1/26 Have I ever mentioned how near perfect of a story this is? Because it is. Just finished reading it for the second time. |
BillBrink chapter 7 . 12/28/2019 Thanks for sharing this. |