Very nice chapter, although I don't remember there ever being any killer missionaries on the island. Mercenaries were a bit more common.

Please write more of this story.

Love it, looking forward to more.

Awesome work so far :)

Loving this story! Are you going to put the awkward “lies” to Felicity ? Please do so !

I'm loving this story so much please continue ASAP I love the set up your adding with Slade and I love the moments your adding with Barry and I really hope you expand on that but I think you need to start season 2 flashbacks within the next 3 or 4 chapyer because the early flashbacks are starting to get a little bit boring but this is a really good story

- 𝐿𝒶𝒸𝒾𝑒

Please write more of this story soon.

You probably won't believe how excited I got when I saw that there was a new chapter!

Great start! I love Tommy so much! Great insight into his thoughts and the musing he does about Lance and why he's being so quiet? Plus the humor that still goes with it... Amazing! It feels very true to Tommy's nature.

Thea's thoughts about watching Oliver fail miserably made me chuckle...true oh so true.

Moira's thoughts made me tear up. I can't even imagine how she must be feeling, knowing that she played a part in sending her son to hell... you really manage to portray her perfectly. Great job!

Okay, seriously Thea cracks me up, the line about the world's most unlikely pair? Genius! And hilarious.
Aaweee, I got some serious feels when Thea wants her big bro with her because he always makes her feel better, even when he's the one in pain! I love the Queen siblings and their relationship so much!

Lmao! Quentin is just too funny, he feels very true to his character. Him always coming back to wondering what he would do or how he would react if it were Sara is perfect and very important! Sara and her importance to a lot of characters tends to be forgotten in the fandom so thank you for bringing her up regularly. He is one of my favorites and I love his and Oliver's very complicated relationship.

Laurel's thoughts were very deep and you did a good job showing how she and her worldview are slowly changing. Whether she wants those changes or not.
The part with the phone call was heartbreaking! Poor Laurel. She's probably going to blame herself for a long time...even though it wasn't her fault.

Poor Thea, she's still so young... her thoughts and feelings are very understandable and she is learning.

Dig's explanations and Lance thoughts on Deadshot was amazing.
Oh loved Dig's surprise that Oliver had managed to fool his family into believing he was stupid. He is very observant. Really like the line that he expected more of Oliver's family.

The conversations between Thea and Dig was very well done and great to read. I love Thea's curiosity.

Moira's thoughts on how much it hurt to see Oliver's hope and the knowledge that the worst was yet to come were gut-wretching.

I loved the part where Tommy's wondering about the worth of a life and his thoughts on what Oliver's answer would be.

Lance respecting Dig was a nice little input.

I really feel for Laurel. It must be so difficult and emotional to learn how wrong she had been about Oliver.

All of Thea's parts are just amazing! I think you nailed her. The curiosity, disbelieve, the slight humor and her knowing her big brother so well.

Same goes for Lance. The way you write him...how he slowly starts to see Oliver in a different light and respect him...his thoughts on how surprising it is that Oliver is actually still half sane. Amazing.

'A story had been carved into her son's body and they had only read the first chapter.'
OMG! This line is everything! It was so beautifully written and just wow!

Loved the interaction Moira and Quentin had with Barry. And Moira's thoughts about him.

I love Quentin's thoughts about the Hood and being a hero and again how wrong he was with his assumptions! And how he realizes that Oliver tried not to kill on Lian Yu... It is so deep.

Again, the same goes for Dig's thoughts on Oliver's perseverance and his thoughts on Slade and how Oliver reminds him of him and yet never once mentioned the man. It's just perfect.

And I know I've said it like a million times before but I love Tommy and the way he tries to lighten the mood.

Another amazing chapter! I was just blown away. The way you write and capture the characters is just mind boggling! Keep up the amazing work and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, whenever you get around to writing it.

love it please write more

Great update. I’m loving Lance’s internal thoughts here. I feel like he would feel guilty for giving Oliver so much crap but at the same time still hold on to some of that anger and resentment for both what happened to Sara and for him being a vigilante. I especially enjoyed it when Lance had to think about the fact that Oliver doesn’t consider himself a hero. Overall, this story is incredible and I look forward to reading more.

I am a fan of arrows from Russia. And I'll say it, we don't write like that. Author don't stop writing

Awesome! I love how you're exploring the Slade friendship.

Will you explore how much of a bond Oliver had with Shado? Imo the best romance.

This story is really really good! Like ultra-fabulous... it is just so well written and all the characters are really well, in character! The writing style is great and I am super excited for more of this. Please update again soon!

love it please write more

love the story please update soon.