wow this last chapter was beautiful.

love

Thanks for the work, it's got a lot of heart and feeling

I feel Maisie will be a good fit, but they still need to take into account they have two kids in college and there are expenses there too. A sixth child might be an option and maybe add some drama with CPS and they remove Maisie from the home after Callie's trouble with Juvie and Jesus's TBI since he is considered a special needs child and they remove her from the home and her grandmother gets custody.

I would love for Maisie's grandmother to take her and the Adams Foster family can be her family friends.

Hope Callie gets out soon. Feel for Maisie.

please update! I'm dying to see what happens next. I need more! I think it would be great if the adopted Maise. If they clear out the garage like they did in the show that could be a room for one of the older kids or the girls could get bunk beds. Honestly it's not that big of a problem because Callie and Brandon will be off to college soon. She would be a nice addition to the younger side of the family and I love that her and Jude clash like kids around the same age normally do.
I also enjoy your writing style. It's very smooth and easy to follow. it definitely allows the reader to live through the story.

I know you added stuff from the show, but the moms were barely making it with the kids after they adopted Callie and Jude and. So I feel adopting Maisie might be overboard?

I read some of the reviews saying that they shouldn't adopt Maisie and if they did, they would need a bigger house. I cannot disagree more. I think there are a lot of easy fixes to make accommodate one more child in their house- such as bunk beds where Callie's bed would be. That would be an easy solution without cluttering up valuable floor space. Also, Callie and Brandon will be heading off to college soon, not to mention Jesus and Mariana the year after, so it's not like they will house 6 kids forever.
On a separate note, I really liked the last chapter. I was a bit disappointed that Jude and Maisie seemed to be clashing, but it's definitely the most realistic seeing that Maisie and Jude are the closest in age to one another. I hope you update again soon!

I adore this story and this chapter was done incredibly. As someone who suffers from PTSD due to sexual abuse, the floor cleaning "scene" was so realistic and relatable. You're doing a fantastic job, keep it up! I'm desperate for the next chapter!

update?!

I love this story! please update soon

This is definitely one of my favourite stories! I love Maisie as a character and your writing style! I hope you’ll keep the story going for a lot more chapters!

If they do adopt her, they need a bigger home. Three girls can't share a room and the kids need to be okay with this. Not just the moms. It would be drama if Brandon weren't okay with this.

I never really review on stories but decided to rn. This is soooo good and I can't wait for it to continue. I'm very interested in Maises story. Thank you for the quick updates.