UPDATE SOON

I'm hoping you'll write another chapter eventually finish the story too good for you to leave it now

Wow! You have done an amazing job! The characters' personnalities are spotted on, it is really well written. I would like an Edward who, after the break up and the fight with the newborns, spend some time alone to work on himself and his overpossessive personnality to be abble to, one day, have an healthy relationship with someone else. I would like an independant Bella that goes to college and sees Jacob the week-end, then who find a job she likes. I would adore it if Bella takes her time before moving in with Jacob and having children. She needs to have friends and activities other than Jacob. Jacob is an important part of her universe, but he is not her entire universe.

Love it please more I want to see what happens.

7. Chapter 7 ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Hit and run then broken but mangled in a shape of a lematya fire was in my system the on the run then and suddenly in my nweborn state rebellieingf wholist with the both the Volturi caught wind of me training/teaching the you die blacking out with they where yoiu think this newbor surrenders of you are put to death Screaming more where's yiur maker We took you away Fire true turned by heart break Anmesiac good with her/they With jhim will break her then then too late Sickr with implanted kids then too late eight to more good brain surgeries then Bitten Their way out from Jake screaminmg scccessfully turninng good what Get her/they with freaks then deathj camed the changing as a cold one good then Blacking out then then Six piceces good where yiu think yiu are going then a planetary power a Self-Densive mental and physical shield Emerged good a weapon then then hair grew longer then With bangs Icy skinned cold as steel cold frozen ice from both bind herr/they then Heart stopped beatng then a Phoenix coven member a Captain of the guard ATwo necklacklaces then Shatterd freely then killed the both with five keneeling then With blood on my mouth mixed was red had Anime Falkor's Ruby red eyes was Bound with my new family and coven mate good Guikty then for immortal children then the five shattered then Both wit theuy with both then screaming we forbidden yiu to live Newborns then Snapped for real then then blw freely get her and they captured wre experiments to them infected with a virus With one huge but biggest bitr good it'sd making you really Syarfleet marine train us/they then the trained then The one is different then Smashed frely then bound to them good mine to keep as What Aura Sailor Soldier we arer progromed good Atomized then then then the Carnivorous selves kept the other ones fled then Ended up been stung then the Bite was huge half-dead the Both found me out of control desired blood gasp the chained the one escaped Murdered get hger thye you are put to sleep newborns then for consorting with him them Head was off then with theirs with yiurs screams then Vaporized then brought there good of the newborns are unable the Goddess/gods are montesters within then Struggling to control myself had as all of old/newest scars wre as all of them Alice who done to you/they then Blacking outside wit they smashed but brought there then Atomized good the bite is poisoning her system it is spreading she's dead wityh they AAMore had hybrids that was it died there Sicker caught a virus Alice then barged in my movie Wedding dress with veil had Borg drone skin paler then had the same Falkor's red eyes gasp Alice we checked bitten us/they is not human at all is Immortal never sleeps of the killed host oh my god then First Hunt to as very as all more than all animals then Poisoned sliced was Freed then brought there then took from here With the kids were Next then too late Was all-venomous looked really ill Alice heer eyes went Yellow with one black dot from too much Found blew freely then both Cursed to roam Was low but grown had kids good they are Severed from humans they converted then took from me/they As all of guards then good meet your mates then in time myself was more paler the host was new again was Sleepless activating but locked Alice she's not living you bet your noses name Bree Tanner which hand it is your left Ew like a Joined Trill allergic to bee stings to our Spots dummy! smashed with they then Sliced freely brought there good they are hosts dead ones Burn the both then too late Killed were with they you twelve die with them then Atomized then lost from here good more guards bitten here then too late Broken from here good departed Death brought them home then too late us/they never age or to die then it was over rescued but saved then it was too late aftermath the families noticed our skins cold as ice as cold snow Smashed freely both then it was too late brought there good Killed by them but five nuked freely with more as all of them never had kids so they too late Severed freely then it was too later vanished good they are Bitten via virus are dead then put them to sleep then took away from here then lost in there Alice we can't die now Bella you are so icy cold yes gasp we never change uh oh it's 2019 by now it was too late from here.

Love it, great story! Please post again soon

7. Chapter 7. that went missing then Drained but was twisted but vengeful then swore revenge onto then attacked then on Jake then drained him then tore with lematya with my army successfully then CLAIRE YOUNG Bitten the guard heard me snapped in furty was in anger take her/they then who turned yiu tell us/they good then she surrenders the fi]inal ghours beaten then left to die assaultedf by as all three as all of them three nbbroken then screamig in my movie wedding dress get her/thyey then Fire in my own home bitten from herte tore it then with they Abused then was scarred then bl;ed to death then then get her with immortal children screraming good then Head lost tore hardest then then with they execuyuted by them with they you Idsabella are charged with murder then screamikg then beaten Nothingness attacked in my own home the fire wqas scorching the both found me screaming then next took from me then Nothingness brought there good guard ended armies of two theese ones Burning bodies the seer found me bitter was Changed into one was fued within the fused NASA Bodysuit Fled where your'masters freak final hours then Take care of heerr/they then ATOMIZED Then tore into two then my heartbeat stopped had eight followed were as all of beaten Lost as all of human memories from both then then lost the will to live Fled good bring the three as all of them Shattered then were exiled to Alaska smashed were more good Shattered then with out memories then Vaporized brought there good rid of them had hosts dead good are killed are Put to sleep then never was human Alice who done to her/they both saved from here shattered that took us/they hunting ti animals i as all of states then were overdrained then blew up with they More good torte from here Brought there good then Burning bodies wanted death gotten there Both then lost from here as all of them good Snapped let them rot and die there they eaten the food of the underworld in death then lost as all of color of the skins Alice they were what with yellow/black eyes of us/they too late smashed they as all of blew apart then Brought there good burn them then Cremated that How I Mourn my death/theirs that was too late myself was Cursed by Sedna was her agent reborn so they was with a thirst :Vengeance and my Revenge dressed like a dead bride on her wedding day gasp Alice they were What Slayers/hunters for Wild Vampires are not living who done to you Rose It's my turn to have my revenge to Slay them see a tree branch CARLISLE! Young lady are you ok fine first I Need to train gasp that is some lethal bite how she placed medicine on my bite frozen me but I Am unable to mate That in time myself became stronger fastest but more agile young lady you are What a Vampire Slayer ike Buffy Anne Summer the bite made yiu very strong as a Ox and are tired that began havig weirdest but alien space dreams of war was prophetic dreams nuked With they smashed Brought there good burn them there then Nothingness then heads good they are bitten freely they moved back but blew up with members are cut from here bring them good burn them we don't yiu to live there then atomized by vaporizing Alice I Had a dream of space war gasp you can't die no of the bites pireced freely you don't die are immortal.

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5. Chapter 5. then Jake drank then from me killed me then exposed the secerrt then to the best friends then the guad found me with fever mono and shakiong under the full moon good exploure rom her then end with biten screamimg with bitten four kids then get her then then Executed then Heads toe loose tell them they exposed themselves then get her/they wholliesdt wehere yiu theink yiu are going nwborn then pain the scramimg attacking the then in my home assauuktd by abusing brutalixzzed beaten to death then the biggest Bite was real she dies now the mangl.d the three the blood toree wedding dress was real the n Thre to thirteen the the Change spread too liate then Nothingness then brought boniesdt bodies then myself was sexually ASdssaultd butr abused the dyting from here ter bopth found me was Dead Changed the with pierced fredd writ bites and biggest bites both gasp like me then the taken from herte the where yiu yiu goinmg newborn kiled peop[le the End them then then Murdered tore from here Executed cruelly then with yu Wolves are real Lycans then Killed with they tore good bring wholliest to the palace then too late the Cause of death was murder then was sicker with child deceased blew up health delined too late smashed into two good bring each both you are Cullens then the Blacking outside then then brought there were more good with each both had what dead kids but they had freaks eight dead bitten are Immortal Children broke the rule must dsie for their crimes thenm with five's Atomized by vaporizing they revealed by exposure good morr guads then myself struggling to control myself with as all of scars as all of them was chained with they then The mother is guilty veridict death screaming then Killed with they good burn the pieces you are Cullens completely punished then tore frelu Nothingness brought here then was unable to mate was still struggklijmg to hold the thirst Alice who done to you gasp one huge bite marked with both fell off then too late was sickest then Blew apart with they brought there decree me/they were unstable then too late killed from here burning bodies and as all of them heads cursed me/they had Reyerson's Disease was a blood disorder gasp Alice she's what dead Smashed without memories with they then brought here died of Reyerson's Disease how I Mourn my death so theirs had Borg Drone skin white like Locutus of the Borg Alice she has no pule or heartbeat then in time as all very mostly much many as tribazillions to more hunting like them more as all suddenly was Frozen solid Smashed freely Tore in two was more brought there cursd with true bitter immortality brought there wre as all of them good deceaserd then myself had a headache a painful focusing my mind was a very mostly powerful the strongest Mental and Phyically seelf-defesive shield she's gifted then suddenly was really upset growling a Coyote just emerged within me was a Shifter/Vampire Slayer hybrid So they ten Snapped necks broken fled with the creatures brougbht there these both then too late phased then was Smashed Sliced by force then brougt there good they as all of them Dead Atomized then destroyed then had Fiery Bright yellow/black eyes gasp they can't die correction urgh my head is driving me nuts that's it you'r sushi Daimons then finally just yelling by screaming glowing Sakuras of pure magical flame exploding within me wearing the bodysuit from NASA BETAZED AURA POWER! MAKE-UP! a burst of lights the fire was real So they yelled then glowing then then it really ancient happened trilling more supremely gloriously but soprano like Lucy Lawless was Xena the Warrior Princess gliding then while in outer space then Violently summoning then a very trilling more Supremely ear spliting ringing more Gloriously but angelic Xena Warrior Princess's war dirge was With a sword and a Chakra gasp very firmer but fuller but stylish bangs oh my god Guided by Betazed the planet of telepathy the pretty soldier in a sailor suit guards over the soul gate allow me to SCORCH YOU! AURA SAILOR BETAZED HAS ARRIVED! blaring was in fact lot far stronger but more powerful was forged in a heat of battle a mighty princess returned to battle in the 21st century via reincarnation to fight them again gasp they done this act onto her/they Paul drank beer spat crap oh my god she is training herself Smashed freely then never returned with as all of them we report they been reincarnated are warriors they are as all dead they transformed into sailor guardians and knights died good rip them alive then more that as all of guards good departed from here then Were four nuked more replacements then too late murdered freely then never returned were burnt good they are dead more as all of them we report it's Shiftpires bitten freely deadf end them as the creators then screams Executed from here tore freely good they lied the one with them destroy them with the others then Ashes then finally that what I Want the carnivorous selves then too late never had kids again they had kids had powers but too late Alice's eyes bulged droped had a vision more powerful than before they are all coming who looking for us they made a big choice the Volturi are looking for her/they with us/they Nothingness were as all of from around the world then smashed with packs snapped Brought there good guilty of the crimes then end them as all are with as all of more members grow too powerful take their heads please then screams was heard then was As all of them good burn them as all with as they then As all of ashes into black toxic tar went white nuked rely were as all of them expanding then Heirs to the throne bitten freely blew up good train them as all of them now go then now was no more humans allowed to roam they wre as all of them as all Infected then too late came too late wiped out good they broke the law then grow far too powerful then was as all of them Bury them as all of them too late by with her then too late No longer alive then we As all of mostly as all were as all of more than as all of them were as all of Vampires as all of them lost four times of blood loss to more blood was deadliest to them blacken veins All veryt far nuked with the bodies of as very far way too much as all of them with us/as all rest/remains to last ons lost heads good Bury by crematio n then too late AWere as all of skins of Shifter fur then too late us/they as all of them immigrated to America witnessed then gathered then too late Were the Cullen witneses as all smashed freely by snapping with both as all Fled to very last ones followed then Brought there good more as all of them they broke law and witnresses of the kids are werewolves smashed freely bitten the mothers died wre Guilty we found accused of treason murder and witchcraft we forbid marriages here they are put to death at once sentenced they All lied disobeyed us Put them to sleep aty once then then Murdered as all of them with covens/packs of shifters More than as all of Blacken veins blew met mates good dead then Trained hardest then blew uo wre Volturi members then too late was over now humans had kids again then stopped they ordered kids to be imprinted by their kids smashed then Bitten from here blew up with us/they Nothingness from here Last few followed smashed then As all of them immigrated snapped Brought there had kids then followed then Pierced freely brought there it's done all of them converted as Vegetarians blew as all of them then lost a wholliest as all amount crop of human and alien and Vulcan blood are much stronger far more powerful but smashed are Americans fully activated then Smashed burn them the humans never had kids again ate grieving here Too late killed then never was alive then too late was Infected from here looked healthier by now Alice as mostly much many more as all all humans stolen to Volterra, Italy they were as all killed blew freely are as all Vampires the tribe are remaining ordered us/they next they had kids as all gone Extinct are orphans deported to us/they by what time travel before the infinity end of time listen it is a sound effect thanks mom we are evolving like far futurstic creatures theme twit Millennium (1989) What?! oh god we are ruling yes please act from the movie ok oh no too late Blacking outside then in time never had kids then too late were on Vulcan with deported as all of it good burn as all of corpses taken good halves with our memories erased then that was it it no more humanity three wayedf us then was next from here then it really happened greetings Agent T'Lar your mission is successful yes then had pointed ears now too late in time the corpses wre as all buried nuked as all of Vampires they used from us\they by now to create hello Bejing how are you you too Lebarre they were animtronic beings Momma mia NASA On Vulcan yes moved myself was really fiercer was holding a Goblin's Assassin's honor blade good god they were created to look humans with pointy ears are gods/goddesses with anime voice actors/actresses yes then too late.

Can we get an update every other day,but if that’s too fast then once every week maybe...keep up the good work your doing great!

I want updates everyday but since that'snot possible im gonna say twice a week lol

5. Chapter 5. then LEMATYAS MAULED TO DEATH HARDEST BITTEN HIM Drew blood the CLAIRE YOUNGB BITTE FROZEN HER As a Immortal Child then BETST FRIENDS DREW AS ALL OF BLOOD THE Guad found me drinking blood you die Scvreamimg then then Short second life pof my death Three the bittte fire Kidnapped then then With him with Whollikest good gusard successfully wiyth the each both The Change is runnig smoothly where yiu think yiu are goiung neweborns Erasedof humanity was with eight followed good drained killed yiur first we will train yiu wit yiur coven bind them thentoe three with each wre with both Risen ten time stronger good That The Phoenix coven created by myself fiver were our crests Brain surgiest then after the kids bitten me harder all-venomous successfully died here wiyth the venom onto then blacking out In my far futristic insane asylum robes was Vulcan was Animaiac opffically wityh no human memories Was Twisted but Vengeful was a made newborn imprint was Biotter and Was a mated but married Coven leader apart of their the change Three bring them the change is succedssful yiu die Three then then the both yiu are too late ours she joined us then then ADestroyrd the imprint forever then dried up then took from me/they with his then Carnivorous Selves then good illiablty ead unacceptable the the Change was from here thentoo later my heart ws dead it stoped forever Alice who done to her/they wiyth they with both Volturi the n struggling to control my thirst and bloodlust then wass With Anime Red eyes hardf skin took it's place then How we/they moun our/their deaths Chained the toe From lifer to death brought there good they are Guilty nine follow them in Death More Carnivorous Selves good pass judgement with the thre then Stolen my life and humanity from me and him with they Alice they did Hunt in Volterra's cages killed their own eyes are Yellow then Smashed frely then with him our daughter imprinted then followed had eight so they a aliance then Snapped three then brought there good more Carnivorous Selves five's corpses Burst more then too late was as all of them good more as all of members spread to as all of found rercuits then too late Alice found me ice cold to the touch to the merged BASA Bodysuits Alice the hair grew long with bangs gasp they done this act you never have more children then bitter icy frostiest but very cold was Scorned Alice they wre tortured What are you doing Rose, your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts then suddenly Cured her done it successfuly Our aunt dead then Snapped three was Immortal by bow then witboth with each both with they with they Tore frely brought there We report the newborns had tamed are ead Are Extinct never returned wrre found guity good they broker the rule grow to far strong but are more biggest End them at once Atomized by vaporizing both burning but scorching good they are more as all of heirs then Tried one more but last time your mind to my mind your thouhts to my thoughts our minds one and whole share your mind with me Rose a white light Activating blaring was Self-defensive mentally and physically shileding by Whispering out Tiv Tiver Narooon! but echoing powerful sharp but clear but Starfleet Stronger as before it was Give Me Success! healing her and myself so they Closed my Dark Golden/brown eyes was in a Trance in a Meditation state was born with Teenage Folded Ocampan ears dressed in White Martaian religious temple traditional but ceremonial robes with Vulcan temple relious jewelry hair in a colif tightiest in a magical ribbon very expandable long hair in a loose fashion wearing My Vulcan Crown ceremonial handmaiden's headress eyebrows were Upswept but slanted The Doctcor Alice she's a Vulcan priestess a what a woman who hold as all authority rank and title must have divine supernatural powers remains truthful to the gods and goddesses remains Chaste holds power over the elements must be holy pure and good and Sacred Bella In the name of Surak Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar is my religious name bound to only to Mount Seleya of Gol it's on Vulcan two Crashed What?! both were heated men oh my god she's a Acolyte of Gol from the planet Vulcan Madam who dares give ye thy name of all Vulcan her voice is more stronger is much eagle sharp but clear You Shrimp um my dog had puppies crap crazy dog a father oh how sweet are you tiny then in time theirs had kittens and puppies were playful but noisiest it was a Zoo but a Ani Get this kitten off from my robes it squeealed a hungry meow it was Germ he meowed who named them I Did The names are good oh how small this baby kitten breed myself held American Shorthair poor angel Harrrrrummph! cat fur how old is he three weeks of age it was so little loved to find toys that jingle Strom Victoria growled at me is warning me What this puppies she's majestic but healthy you puppy are trouble Strom he's a mixed breed puppy yes what a dog yes he squealed like a puppy oh are you sweet what a beautfiul dog yes we are dog breeders Not this time Junior he was so tiny loved to get into trouble was Broud their theme was from a Dog movie no way Sir! look at this Ack! both whined oh no Captain gracious they are what on the newspaper it's from Babylon 5 They are housetrained oh no it said JOIN PSI CORPS NOW! we bought it Momma mia 2258 yes He was in horror of a Planet was Centauri Prime Sir! Shadows are the ancient race in the galaxy are a major threat oh no move crap you punk ulp watch on him sorry Relax good god Man Alice look oh my god Herself had a vision of one planetary species let us see oh man a 2258 Earthforce Academy graduation Let me see it that was it Bree just reading it a copy ooh alien love hotel very kinky here in the station yes before destruction Pu' O Boy dolly Pu' took a job there oh man team You we in there yes oh man we are in a Merged Unicat hugest one nuked was from here Blown was real With deported things huh I Wanna see Shadows and all her giggles were louder we wee in San Diego, Cailfornia oh god beer he took one swing then spat out it's from Meatballs really oh man Exploding were as all of rv's around the world with supernatural beings laid good bring them then Killed from here with As all them followed then no longer alive now ruled by Vampires then too late humanity were slaves were next joined us/they then s[lit freely then Blown then with three from our cousins both then Fusion but violently ripped FTL Was gone then was were more followed merged then too late both with both was next Exploded then created a starship sop massive blew up then now In warp drive Destroyed then it was real then now as all of them were no longer here then too late Momma mia watch the baby it's hungry madam then Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! it was male Atreyu watch it Morris yeah he was Muscular oh no he went slightly white oh man you are toned yeah Vampires took from us so yours as all of them Blown then it was a real vessel now with as all of them us lost a planet but ware as all of it then got a GYM We could train Shattered it sped faster then it was real The milltary you With us/they merghed we are going to sleep of a threat it's Xenomorphs oh ugh then DESTREOYED Then then Was a real Starship for now roaring to more merged it was going to War Smashed it was true all American blue not human starcruiser now as all overextremely mostly much many more as all years Sped up then suddenly bodies as all onto planets colonized good they are dead tell them more as all of Vampires rose then too late Was a lot from Earth then myself hafd My Sleep pj's hair in a low bun with bangs firmer but fuller her ears are pointed my new toned body was Athletic but stronger as before then Used My own long fingers Knocked One Marine down ow used my fingertip a chant she's what Vulcan yes Where's my uniform look down that dressed in a Catsuit was Vulcan with my rank Sub-Commander was Earth Federation was in fact Starfleet Bridge I Ordered sighten a man was Captain Solok Was with my best friends Sir she is here on a Ambassadorial mission yes what year is this please it's 2019 what you look like my wife a younger verison name T'Lar gasp Torak she is trained ow dear we lost Earth to them Billy's sick very badly needed medical help and must be treated in Mount Seleya it's real yes rest Dad yes Harry passed on he is in the Vulcan coffin to be cremated it really happened marching with them were in fact trained Zeta two mark one impulse power three five six Gamma beta delta five two Hercules Echo Full Stop My Official orders to report as Sub Commander Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar of Vulcan as Chief Counselor oh no that was it it was Red as blood our planet hang on it suddenly gilding very elegantly but gracefully desended into the planet Vulcan my new world too later as all of it.

Interesting premise for a story. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Thanks for sharing. xo

She's feeling the imprint and slowly accepting the pull

2. Chapter 2. bitten as al best friends with lematya poison to the rest then finally the three the guard found me slaying bring them the you there are sever where's yout creater then the Mauled by a brown sehlast hardest with they With as all of lematyas get them the assaultd then then abused mmangled three of one biggest Bite from the Bodysuit good gard where's your coven the the End them with both the tooooore Wearing my movie wedding dress the then fled faster the you die from bitten three kids then Executed Heads tore loose with others get them with her you broke treaty law then the let tje trial bein the screamig the tooe Mauled to death with as all of blew freely brought them good guard tey are p[ut to sleep without blood s all of very far mazillions or mostly much many morer made a army the chained then the the one broke the law we find you Isabella guiilty toe head with theirs Snapped from hre bring them they are Dead then brought thee It came to late the Bite was real then Arkaana made me Immortal but ageless then weith they Smashed freely wit they Bodies vanishd to very far overextremely around the world then waited for it to stop then Opened my new eyes were Anime Falkor's red spaklimg from the Lemtaya venom heaviest but stranded then capted good the guilty sentenced she surrendered take care of thast killed with they them Executd cruelliest then punished declared me unfit to live Both the with myself snapped then struggling to control Alice who done to them them then tore with they had eight followed with they Destroyed both then brought there good guard they never return to here ther rest executed her/they woityh both men with they Atomizedx the bring the both good they are Pumnished then then too l As all guards bitten freely were as all then very as all of guards as al l of them then Three nuked from my blood was Toxic waste as all of state then with Nine Blacken veins the were as all of ashes good the heirs as all are mutated they created Shiftpires with stolen looks/traits/blood/powers/abliies blown were more then too late myself With Donated Animal blood Alice she was killed but resurrected my head going to the planet Vulcan Kai'fifliee! had finally challenged fluently in perfectly Vulcan gasp she challenged as for our days as for our tomorrows as from the of the beginning it is day but it is now I Shall make my choice This One! pointed at Jake very coldly was born with Teenaged Ocampan ears were Pointed upswept eyebrows were slanted dressed like a Vulcan bride robes and veil long hair in a coilf with bangs cut never grew back wearing a Crown-headress was Vulcan gasp invoked the Koont'ut'fi'fliee declared Challenge Sir! she Challenged it is a woman's right to chose a mate Madam you dare to speak to a Acolyte of Gol oh dear lord priestess found it Ben sorry check a ha you declared as what his wife then Jake noticed otherworldly but galactic looks looked like a Vulcan woman in her early twenties or more oh my god where you speak well-perfectly Vulcan found as all webpages she is very skilled but fluent in their language Alice it is marriage or challenge she chose Challenge Yikes it was Randall freaked out this is a ritual of both then Smashed both then tore from here Brought there good they are Departed then lost from here holy mother of god she is his Woman Good god woman you look from the planet Vulcan yes guys poor angels then poor babies birth is a messiest business Bree was dressed in robes wearing both holy planets it's the thinner air greater gravity um' Garrett welcome to Gol good lord it's murderous so my cadre of Acolytes I Thought Vulcan marriages were arranged by families gasp Aice chill out can't they know they done more than as all uh oh both gods are workin' as a team her giggling are undercover oh no not that Ulp you Shrimp ulp KROYKAH! It was Stop! or Enough! oh my god you are what a priestess yes oh no not him oh yeah that is Paul with they attending gasp they know yu done created more you can't die.