I love Jack the best. I especially love stories where he hurt and Mac has to take care if him. There's not to many of those kind.

I wish you would add more to this like how Jack saved Mac and got infected. And maybe showing Mac taking care of Jack.

Good story, but I would have written it longer, I was wanting to see Jack suffer a little more and to know how he saved Mac. I love Jack and I love reading stories where he is the protagonist and he gets sick or injured. I hope you write another one very soon about Jack

That was a really sweet story - its nice to see Mac being so caring of Jack for a change - everyone seems to like the Mac whumps but I have a soft spot for Jack. Nicely portrayed characters. Thanks for sharing.