please continue!

Jt

Ron's acting like Draco

Oh wow all five of them fits under the cloak! Thank you for the update

Molly Weasley would have written "sabotage Harry" in her howler.

I love Hermione having slapped Malfoy. Now she needs to slap Crabbe, Goyle and Weasley too.
"build-up" in "build-up of tension" should be hyphenated.
"Gryffindors were all chanting", not "Gryffindor's were all chanting".
"clipboard" should be one word.

Yay! at Luna having formed the new golden trio with Harry and Hermione, who offered her their friendship.
Prof. Flitwick would have said "lose 25 points".
Yay! at Luna getting all of her possessions back.

More than one Slytherin are Slytherins, without an apostrophe.
Yay! at Harry casting the Patronus. And I hope Weasley and his goons get punished findishly harshly.

More than one of the four dreadful Dursleys, are Dursleys, without an apostrophe. Just like more than one professor, who noticed Harry's improved academic performance, are professors, without an apostrophe.
IMO Draco Malfoy is a pureblood bigot who's rich and Ron Weasley a pureblood bigot who's poor, so, good riddance.

Thanks for the much anticipated heads up

Love your Line breaks! For some reason I can't help but hear it in my head yelled at me by Darin de Paul in the voice of Reinhardt.

Thought you ought to know.

Well, that's a cliff hanger.

Have them stun Pettegrew so Sirius can be freed.

You naughty cliffhanger you. Well will wait with baited theres an alliteration for for the read.

I'm impressed to see that Ginny actually got over the fangirl phase and started seeing Harry for who he is and befriending him. Too bad canon Ginny was nothing like this one. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!