Great story.

I have to say fighting scenes are half the fun in an action story like Naruto. I hope major fights will be described. If you find those scenes really have try to copy them from other (only the fight scene) and adjust to the story and characters' jiray.

Interesting...

Ah, what a refreshing chapter

Lol, wtf...

I still find the dynamic between him and his team still sickly with the whole "your family" part considering his everyday interactions with people not on his team but whatever. The revealment of Narutos heritage is a nice change of pace compared to other stories.

Interesting how you went off the "to afraid to killwhat have I done" route, that's a nice change of pace.

For someone who's paranoid he sure doesn't mind talking about his Sharingan in public does he... I get. that they're his comrades but he couldn't tell them when they were in a private setting? okay then... Also, did you really just make him sing Spongebobs song (sweatdrop)...

Awww no homo no yaoi? Cant the OC be bi sexual? xD

I’m here

Reminds me of that Explosism episode...

Hahaha... Interesting... I'll say... You have a lot to improve but still, well done...

A bit fast paced... But we'll see.

continue please.

This whole fic is amazing, be confident in that.