The characters at ffxii were not developed enough and naturally it will be hard to connect with any stories/fanfiction about them. About this story i feel it was too slow? Also feels like there was too much dialogue on the story(too much drama?) otherwise its good though.

Wrong upload?

When penelo said larsa-sama, it felt pretty odd you know? Because the setting of dalmasca was heavily influenced by medieval europe and or persia. And when you blend them together it just felt weird.

Thanks for the story

Nice story
Certainly a unique one