nooooooooooooo i hope you plan on continuing this fic

please, updated soon this is so good and awesome! I really want to see next chapter and more! please update! I'm begging you! TwT but also thank you too, for this story

recently I've been addicted to Yu-Gi-Oh and in order to satiate my recent addiction I decided to look for fanfiction only to discover that there aren't as many oc insert ones as i thought. So I was pleasently surprised when I came upon this fanfic. only to slightly upset that it had only 4 chapters and hadn't been updated in three months. So I look at your page to find answers only to find a plethora of other fanfics that have snatched up my attention. My point of writing this comment is to let you know I'm addicted to writing and I can stop reading also I hope you updated this if not then that's fine. There's more of you're stories I haven't gotten a chance to read yet. You're amazing 3

this is good too, I like it lot. C:

aww, your welcome, it's quite an outstanding story, ah, I'm getting so anxious, please update and thank you as well!, X3

hey, love this, it's awesome and crazy story, I hope you'll keep it up! 3 3

omg, this is a sweet horror and romance story you've made, I hope you'll update soon enough, also kohaku and yami the spirit gets close to each other, and it was also intriguing that kohaku had met his past self life there, when he was the pharaoh of Egypt and all, before he has sealed himself and the dark magic away, aww, I'm thankfully that at least kohaku starts opening up a bit more or all, maybe she'll give a really smile when she can., can't wait for to see next, update please, and many thank you!,

huh, you did use the suggestion I gave already?, nice so that feeling kohaku had felt was actually the spirits pain and suffering feelings, after you know being trapped within the puzzle for so many years, and it remind her for two years and said under the care of him?, interesting, ., anyway I bet she would want answers why she felt that from the spirit of the millennium puzzle pain and suffering.

but of course for the spirit it will be too painful for him to say, when he can also show kohaku in his mind of the dark tormented he had been through also you know flashback, while telling her about his dark prison lifetime., if you like to add this also

and further more, I hope I get to see some sweet between kohaku and the spirit, might also want to help the spirit be happy that is yami, oh she can also give him that name too, it would be easy to call him yami, knowing it's means darkness, it suitable for him,

so I'm guessing along would be hard beat, huh nice I had readied of the yugioh manga, and I'll be looking forward to see more to this also and all, please update, also thank you for this epic story, 3

yup, so awesome!, can't wait for more and I wonder what's gonna happen next, might get really dangerously and crazy., please update and thank you very much on this too, ;3

this made my balls tingle with delight