| Reviews for All I Ask of You |
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   wearethewitches chapter 12 . 8/26 awwww, this was so good - easily the best Labyrinth fic i've ever read xxx |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/5 Loved this fic so much! You hit Sarah’s sardonic voice right on the head and had me laughing and frowning and whirling with the characters. But the huge shift from chapter 11 to 12 was so jarring and dissatisfying. I would have LOVED to see more of the in-between as opposed to a night of light hearted revelry smash cut to half a pregnancy later smash cut to five YEARS later than that. It felt really rushed to me. Your voice is so great and I loved the interplay between the characters. I just wish you had done more with it. |
| Minavi chapter 1 . 7/24 Very nice start. I could feel Sarah's frustration at the beginning. That must have been quite a scene for Jareth to come upon. It's nice to see them start of as hesitant friends. |
| Guest 2020 chapter 12 . 7/22 Your story was enjoyable all the way through. Thanks. |
| lucidscreamer chapter 12 . 7/22 Delightful, as always. :) |
| Guest 2020 chapter 11 . 3/14 I read the last chapter again, with intent to provide a more dispassionate review, but there is just too much that I enjoyed to encapsulate it. Jareth peering behind Sarah for the child in question..., It's a stick with lines on it..., and so much more. The whole chapter was adorable! Thanks again. |
| lucidscreamer chapter 11 . 3/14 Loved it! (I have a huge grin on my face after reading this one.) :D |
| Guest 2020 chapter 11 . 3/14 Say what?! I'm agog at the turn of events! Blindsided! Oh, what a marvellous surprise! I'll write another fuller review later, but right now I just want to bask in the happy feelings. Thanks. |
| Guest 2020 chapter 10 . 2/14 What did or did not take place? I suppose confusion of the reader may well have been your intent. If so, you were successful, as I am left perplexed by this chapter. Thanks for the update. |
| Apples10 chapter 9 . 1/3 Yay! I just discovered this story and I really like it! Looking forward to the next update _ |
| Guest 2019 chapter 9 . 12/31/2019 A very entertaining chapter, which I hugely enjoyed. Thanks. |
| Kitsune chapter 8 . 12/29/2019 I love it 3 best story ever! |
| Guest 2019 chapter 8 . 12/22/2019 Interesting chapter. Thanks. |
| AnonymouslyJoker chapter 7 . 12/21/2019 Just coming to say I love the latest chapter and everything about the characters, they your own spin but still very much within character in my opinion. I cant wait until the next chapter, stay lovely! |
| Guest 2019 chapter 7 . 11/27/2019 Looks like a romantic relationship is developing between Jareth and Sarah. Enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the update. |
