Wow now this was amazing. I WISH I could be half as great.

Hey man, I know it's been a while since you've messed with this story, but I think it was pretty well done, and I would personally love to see more of it. Either way, nice work.

I really enjoyed reading this. It’s exploring a different side of the world. I hope you decide to continue with this plot. Although, I do feel that Raphtalia was just a little OOC with her last thought. Something about it seemed a little too straightforward with her character. Maybe I’m wrong though.

I think that your characterization of everyone was pretty good. My only problem was with Naofumi. I think adding a line where he just ignores her screams, and just focuses on his pleasure, or where he is rocky with kissing Mirilla, and isn't as cooperative with her. Or he makes her become his slave, and screw her, but when she confesses, he would think about removing it. Either way, not bad.

Still waiting for the second part

We need more ! And fast! Make Naofumi fuck Malty too and she loved it.

yeehaw chucklefucks
big dicc naofumi
cucked all of melromarc
fuck you faubley, ur next

...I'm sorry for the shitpost, but I just could not resist. Thank you for the Royal Lemon.

A little rough in your phrasing but enjoyable. I would have played up Mirellia's more experienced older woman to Naofumi's lack of experience. Could have done without Filo getting jealous. Also what if Melty falls for him as well and he becomes her husband AND stepfather when she grows up.

I loved this! The queen was one of my favorite characters all the way back when the novel was just being translated.
I hope to see more of this glorious story in time even just based on the implications of naofumi becoming something almost similar to a concubine given his refusal of the king role.

There should just be a series of Naofumi and Queen series

Lmao, great lemon but that ending was purrfect!~

Best naofumi vs Queen lemon one shot.

continue, o no

Do one were they have a baby

I really love this pairing and wish their was more fanfiction dedicated to it so good job dude