i would prefer six paths Naruto. Saiyan thing is old

hmm, I think I'd have preferred if you'd done something like, Ophis grabbed Naruto from another dimension/reality so we'd have no other dragon ball characters. Because while some parts of DB were good, fun, even entertaining, the constant ridiculous power-ups were bad. The good guy reaches level 5, the next villain is level 30! The good guy reaches level 35, the next bad guy is level 50! And on, and on, and forever on. To the point that the universe should've collapsed about 25 times over with all the power thrown around.

Even though this is a Naruto-in-name-only fic, with him being Saiyan and all, I still like it because I hate Issei myself. I can read crossover fics featuring main characters I like but where Issei has turned around, becoming a slightly perverted but decent guy, or sidelined mostly, like FILFY Teacher.

But I hate fics where he has a harem and/or is a still central character. Only seen a few fics like yours or similar, where Issei is removed, has the Boosted Gear removed, or is totally replaced, like Xander DxD. So I'll give this a chance for that alone.

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this story doesn't have an ounce of creativity.

explain to me how you manage with so much talent cut in a horrible way Issei's personality?
I'm sure you wrote this story out of frustration only to let off steam on Issei?

Issei is a badly generic character written with litte personality and you butchered even more his character which isn't terrible?

why is a majority of authors unable to mature Issei, bash him replace him only for his harem?

Issei may not be a great character, but his characterization was horrible, excruciating. probably the worst characterization case I have ever read!

por favor continualo esta increible no se si agregaras al grupo de rias al harem pero si decides ponerlo has que koneko sea la primera en entrar ella se lo merece por su caracter fuerte y decidido.

Pues la ideal es buena pero para mi meter dragon ball a un fic destruye los niveles de poder pero bueno es mi opinon personal continúa tu historia man yo me retiro por la sombra

nice chap bro an nice story im actually enjoyin it hope ya update soon would b a shame for a Great story go to waste

will naruto learn Super sayian 4, super sayian god, super sayian blue, ultra instinct?

I really want to read what happens next. The story is amazing and It has already been more than a month since it has been updated.

out of curiosity, is rias going to get 8 new pawn pieces, on account of issei being dead, or what's going to happen? just curios?

Great chapter and please update soon.

Issei's bashing was far too cartoony to be credible
bashing is shallow for whatever reason.

true fact during his date with raynare, Issei was a true perverted gentleman, not once did he commit a perverted act.
it was only after joining Rias that his perversite became unbridled.

and you could remain kind, even it's fanfiction, if some people don't like Issei's bashing and criticize you for it, it's their right!

the girls were way too bitchy, in a week they choose to suck the naruto dick? congrats!

Irina was Issei's childhood friend and the first girl to kiss him! (it was before he became a pervert of course).

when Naruto martyred issei, she seemed much too static, robotic while Issei is supposed to be her childhood friend? (unless you changed that which doesn't seem to be the case?)

aren't saiyans supposed to have some kind of pride? why use a tool? In the canon, Goku or Vegeta I no longer remember saying that they preferred to use their own power rather than an external source.

and why absolutely insist on paired Issei's harem with Naruto when it comes to naruto and irina only?
it seems too forced too

Who is Naruto's father in this story?

You know this seems more like this is Irina's harem than Naruto's, haha she is quite clever though.

Must admit I am pumped to see Sairaorg. Would be a travesty for him not to appear in the tournament.

Neat chapter.