Please tell me this isn't finished. I need to know what happens next. I was shocked and I knew who hides behind the mask :-D
I really enjoyed the way you developed the tension

You're really talented! I love how you struck a balance between your slightly more mature theme and the spirit of the original work. Kudos

Whoa! I really loved this. Excellent work.

I like it! This could so be continued for at least 1 more chapter! Please?-