This story was great. You write very well and I enjoyed your different literary references. I think you have a really good handle on the criminal minds characters too. I love the way you write Emily and JJ.

Great Eddie Izzard reference too!

Love your story, please update soon :)

lol i love that what JJ sees as wooing, is surprise fruits and chocolate at work. i cant wait to see what she'll do next. update soon!

You made my day and had me in stitches! Emily’s reaction to the apple and chocolates was so funny, quite the visual. Poor JJ, her attempts weren’t so subtle and the team betting was humorous.

I really hope the visit goes well between them. I could picture them as a happy family especially at Emily’s new home.

I am also enjoying how Emily’s talents come through with Scully. She is truly amazing. Love it.

I love this story with a badass Emily and JJ. What would make my day is if the guys are taken by an unsub and the ladies rescue them. I am on pins and needles waiting for Emily to finally see JJ’s interest for something more than friendship. Spectacular update and laughed out loud when she called security after finding the mysterious apple.

I enjoyed this chapter, the discussion or should I say analysis of the team’s orientation. I have always imagined Emily to be the same way as described by both Morgan and Alvez. She definitely has had worldly experience and it shows in her confidence. One thing that was missing was the analysis of JJ and Alvez themselves, but we could guess.

I definitely love the break down of each character. I could definitely see it. JJ’s mission to find out is pretty funny. Love the tension surrounding her. Great writing!

Thank for the update. Can’t wait for the next one! Hope it’s soon!

lol love it. JJ's sexual tension just grows more and more until she combusts.

I think Emily has some idea about JJ’s attraction but she would never initiate anything. It will take JJ making the first move.

Regarding the possible promotion, I don’t envy Emily. I would be torn too.

Good, JJ is now free and hopefully her and Emily can pursue things.

I always liked the idea of Emily knowing Ziva. It made sense that they would cross paths, two kickass women of international intrigue.

Well done Emily. She appealed to him as a father.

Too hilarious!

Right on, JJ was awesome.

I’m hooked. Please update soon! Great writing.