Good premise, but the story felt a little rushed.

Your best thus far. Delightfully satisfying!

Interesting story, but not quite as good as all your others. Mostly because it was like a bunch of snapshots to keep it short and I had to use my imagination to read between the lines and I don’t like having to guess what is actually going on. Now maybe it’s because I’ve only had a couple sips of coffee this morning, but I felt like the prophecies were too vague to be worth the time you took to write them if they were not gong to be at least better explained. I got the first prophecy well enough. But the second one, which was the reason they had to marry, wasn’t actually explained except for the info that indicated they have to marry or doom everyone, I would have preferred more detailed wording of the prophecy than that. But I’ll just blame these feelings on my lack of caffeine right now and just move on.

God I love your dialogue. Great story too.

This is the best royalty au ever!

GM you are amazing! a great story, very clever, so many great lines. I thought my fave was one about Ron following Hermione around,hoping she would trip and fall onto his lips! LOL But Ginny wouldnt be Ginny if she wasnt saying things like "I'll enjoy my husband where I like!"

wow brilliant story loved it..!

Enjoyed it! Thanks so much. HG 3

Oh I loved it so much! It was refreshing to read a story like that and Harry and Ginny are simply adorable in it! I really liked that Ginny was such a badass! Really, good job!
-Hedwig

Outstanding I love it!

I’m out of words... omgggg that was awesome! Thanks for this amazing story!

Really like how you reversed their roles! Harry and Ginny still shine through even in their different circumstances. One question - Ginny has seven brothers?

great story

nice!

“So, consummation”
LMAO oh harry...