Great story! More! Please! xD

Tienes que continuarlo! Esta historia me atrapó desde el comienzo

Are you going to stop here, with one chapter left? Please don't! I want to see the end. I guess it's end-ish, but it says second-to-last chapter, soo.. :)

This is an amazing stod

Good chapter. I wonder what reaching Oona would do. Probably convince her to help or do the mind control thing. Anyway, post the rest of them!

Is Irene okay? Will ace be okay? What's going to happen next? So many questions! Great chapter, Caleb and phoebes arguing was really funny between all the drama.

Read this story in two days... I think I am addicted to it... xD Can't wait for the chapter.

Stop doing that, scaring me and pretending it's the end! Only joking, but I was seriously terrified that you'd left it on that massive cliffhanger. Great chapter, ace was so funny!

Wowowowowow! Really good chapter, everything's happening so fast, it's great!

Was the name Alzolay possibly in reference to the Chicago Cubs pitcher, Adbert Alzolay?

When you said that was it and I thought you were actually going to end it on that enormous cliffhanger I had a mini heart attack. But then I read the only joking bit and I was so happy because I love this pic so much! Anyway, great chapter!

Excellent! I love that she actually bothered to say the truth about Divergents and the city and such. I loved that moment where all the Divergents stood up, and people actually took her seriously.
Please do not pull an Allegiant and kill Phoebe. That would be incredibly cheap. I suppose it will end however it does, but at least an end that spurs the city on to revolution/reforming would be fun.
Either way, good chapter!

Loved this chapter. Great story. That cliffhanger though...

Good chapter! I feel bad for Ravi, I wonder if there's anything going on there like with the factionless schools. Please put out the next chapter soon, I'm curious about what she's planning to do. If she does go factionless, I hope she meets up with Ravi and Jed.

One of the things about how Candor works in this is probably that if you were totally honest about everything you did, you'd get stopped before you did anything major, since you'd be honest about seeking out the info and honest about what the details said. If you hide the preliminary info, then you can be accused of being sneaky and dishonest when you come out with the full truth later. I guess the moral here is that every faction has mechanisms in place to ensure that nobody says anything important.