It’s an entertaining story and I’m looking forward to more. You need more focus on Jaune/Kimi since that is the main draw of the story. Also more Musashi involvement instead of just “RWBY canon just with Kimi tagging along.”

Other than spelling errors, I liked this!

Why does every drunk marriage use a hyphenated name like “Arc-Aoi” or combined names like “Arcwitch”. Why can’t anyone just have their names be “Arc”? Is he really such a loser his wife won’t even take his rather prestigious name?

Question you going ever update Hero Remnant Academia?

Quite funny chapter Trough it would need a lot more of work.

Sweet chapter, but same requestions about describing more those scenes.

Wow another shit story with the same Jaune Arc drunk Marriage. Man can't you people think of anything other than this. Looks like the RWBY fans that worship Jaune Arc again has written stories where he is the only male character that gets lucky with a girl all the time. Hey how about you turn this into a Harem with all the others girls, what about giving him an edgier back story, or maybe reveal that he discovers the Holy Grail and possesses the Gate of Babylon somehow. That is pretty popular with you Jaune Arc fans right? Right?

Save your favorite youtubers from coppa.

Nice

Keep up the good work

The new chapter is very well written and the beginning is very well done. Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter.

Could you have Kimi have a bonding sister like moment with ruby since ruby is as close to a younger sibling as jaune has in the show.

Interesting chapter, loved Nora

I’m with Jaune. Giving your friend a birth control pill seems like an odd thing to do; besides how long do they take for it to work effectively? Could there be a chance that it didn’t work?

his partner and probably love interest Pyrrha died trying to stop the one who caused all that.
keyword here being probably.

Jaune asked sobbing at the lost of the girl he the love of his life.
Despite him showing no romantic interest in Pyrrha during Beacon. . . sure. Also for someone he calls "the love of his life" it didn't take him very long to move on.

"Yeah, and Pyrrha had feelings for me probably after our team was formed.
Actually it was when they first met, when he said he didn't know who she was, and that is the only reason she fell in love with him, what is just shitty writing for any romance.

"Yes, and Pyrrha the hardest decision in her life." Kimi said in a sad tone.
If by hard you mean stupid, people sacrificing themselves doesn't have an impact when you know it could have been completely avoided and it's hard to care about Pyrrha's death because she died do to her stupidity and pride.

Never thought I'd see a RWBY crossover with Horizon.