| Reviews for Of a Demigod and a Hero Trainee |
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  Brittney chapter 5 . 9/19 Update plz |
 Sirius Lupin-Black chapter 5 . 9/20 When Are you going to update this |
| JustASasser1 chapter 5 . 9/1 Great book. plz keep on updating and can u make the chapters longer |
| CRUDEN chapter 5 . 9/2 Mhm not a fan of multiple POV in a single chapter, the constant changes make the flow of the chapter feel choppy and it is also redundant having multiple POV for the same event. I would advise to go for a 3rd person POV if you want multiple character thoughts through the chapter. |
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 9/1 Percy unlike the other students knows about death since a Demigod lives a dangerous life most of them don’t reach sixteen. |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 9/1 excellent work on this chapter and great test :) |
| gpbumann chapter 5 . 9/1 I’m exited for this |
| Stormgate chapter 5 . 9/1 I thought this went well, although I did catch a shift at one point from first person to third person POV that you might want to fix. |
| Genesis Draconian chapter 5 . 9/1 Not bad but not as great as chaptet 4 pls keep it up and pls post again soon |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/2 Oh I forgot this is after Kronos I thought this is after Gaea, that’s why you don’t know why some of us consider percy as ridiculously strong. Let me quote what Nico said at the ‘Mark of Athena’ book telling the roman kids that Percy is the most powerful demigod he had ever seen/met. And there are more arguments about Percy being the strongest amongst them other than the fact that He’s one of the children of the big 3. There’s also more reason why Percy is ridiculously strong just like the original Perseus but I guess that rubs on Zeus pride. But anyways I’m not here to fight It’s just after reading the Heroes or Olympus it still didn’t deterred the fact that Percy is still the strongest. I mean Jason is powerful, one of the most powerful. He’s just not THE most powerful. Percy is. He’s probably the most powerful since Hercules. Which, I got to say, has got to piss Zeus off. Zeus has an ego, and Percy existing is the biggest insult to it I’ve ever seen. Sorry If this seems insults you or offend you in anyway. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/29 I think I read the dates wrong, sorry. I love this story :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/29 Are you ever going to continue this? I love it it’s very fun to read, I get that you may have moved on but I’m just curious :) it’s been like a whole year. |
| Genesis Draconian chapter 4 . 6/23 Awesome story pls keep ig up looking forward to the next chapter so pls post soon |
| Butter chapter 4 . 6/17 Cant wait till the next chapter! Awesome job! |
| Jose19 chapter 2 . 6/18 Percy is quite powerful even on this world he can accomplish great things here. |
