John Wick could do a whole lot worse than the Avengers combined.

Oh, and, um. . . Please continue this story.

YEAH, BABY, YEAH! John-f*****-Wick straight up threatened Loki.

"You talk of monsters, but you've lived as a Prince until now, you have no idea what a monster truly looks like. So, why don't you look into my eyes? Because, trust me, the stories you've heard about me have been watered down. I suggest you never mention my wife again if you want to keep your life. Because I assure you, nobody, not even your brother, would be able to stop me from killing you. Be seeing you."

Yeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhhh, Tony. . . You better not say anymore sh** about John Wick.

"John is a man of focus . . . commitment . . . and sheer will. Something you know very little about."

Increíble ojalá la hubieras continuado

PLEASE UPDATE! I need more!

"I'm fucking John Wick."

Still a better quote than I'm Batman.

Okay that last paragraph was badass

It's amazing, will you continue?

Looking forward to the NeXT update

well done mister or miss author well done indeed! i look forward to many more chapters thank you for writing this wonderful story!

I wanted to like this. It is a very, very niche crossover and I love both verses. But, I could barely get through the first story chapter.

The scene change was jarring. You didn’t even put something to let the reader know the scene or POV changed. I had to reread the section multiple time before it clicked.

Another thing is that the story shows a distinct lack of knowledge and research on your part. This is , so you don’t need to be an expert on anything, but general details would give your story character and a touch of authenticity.

A few examples:

Wick cocking his gun against Fury’s head:

You don’t cock a firearm against something. You cock the action to make the firearm ready. Either cocking the hammer back to put the weapon into single-action or cocking the slide to rack a round into the chamber, etc etc. it might seem nit picky, but just reading it is jarring. If you are looking for writers who write that genre with a good amount of gunplay and expert knowledge, I recommend Vince Flynn or Brad Taylor.

I can understand Natasha knowing who Baba Yaga is or the reputation, but she sounds starstruck. Natasha is an elite spy/assassin basically raised from birth to do that job...while I can understand healthy respect, not such a sense of awe. If anything, it is more realistic for Natasha to be the more experienced of the two.

Also, Baba Yaga, as someone has mentioned, does not translate to boogeyman. Baba Yaga is an ogre, some sort of female woods witch or something. They use it in John Wick because it is sort of like the Russian version of the boogeyman, kinda like La Llorona is the Hispanic boogeyman.

Then, the scenes were so short. They rushed a lot of development. Like how does Fury know about John or at least, how does he know where John lives? It really doesn’t make sense for SHIELD know about John wicks underworld and not targeting them...as they are essentially organized criminal underground. My point is you zoomed past so much stuff, that the first chapter didn’t grab my attention or keep it.

Finally, I love John Wick the movie. I think it did a lot to change action movies going forward. But when Fury said he could take out everyone on the team, I blinked owlishly for what felt like eternity.

John Wick is the most capable person? Like...no. Maybe on par with Clint and Natasha went it comes to direct combat, but...can he actually be a threat to Thor, Hulk, or Captain America? No way...

Anyway, that’s as far as I read, which sucks cause I wanted to like it. Don’t take this as a flame, but constructive criticism. I hope you continue to grow as a writer and write more unique stories.

I’m liking it so far brother, hope you can continue this. Very unique concept

Baba Yaga does not translate to boogeyman. Do your research.

Awesome.

please, more