Reviews for Wounds (Sansa & Sandor)
magnus374 chapter 11 . 5/2
Well at least there will be time to get him to change his mind.
magnus374 chapter 10 . 3/16
More complications for them, but these are expected ones.
magnus374 chapter 9 . 1/22
Now they were talking at least and that made things looks more hopeful, even with that ending line.
magnus374 chapter 8 . 11/24/2019
As I mentioned before, Sandor is his own worst enemy. Sansa is doing everything she can to show him what she feels, he really need to snapp out of his bad mood.
magnus374 chapter 7 . 11/20/2019
A good chapter.
AP.Violin chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
The premise sounds interesting and I really wanted to delve deeper into the story if it wasn't so hard to read, it definitely needs a beta due to the severe inconsistencies in the pronouns (his/her) and the structure of the phrases are almost like they are taken directly from google translate. Sorry.
magnus374 chapter 6 . 9/26/2019
Sandor can be his own worst enemy but hopefully Sansa got through to him.
BlackMetalHeart chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
You have a great story idea but it is difficult to read. There are several consistency issues, especially when it comes to 'him/her/his/hers'. I believe that you would get a lot better traction if you got someone to beta your story for you. The idea is really good, just see if you can get someone to look it over and smooth out some of the grammatical issues.
Garber Baby chapter 3 . 7/31/2019
Aright. This is so poorly formatted I had to stop reading, which is a shame because it’s a very good story so far. PLEASE- for the love all that’s holy- learn how to use quotation marks. Dashes (as displayed above) are for aside remarks by the writer. NOT FOR DIALOGUE. Quotation marks are for dialogue. Learn to use them!
magnus374 chapter 5 . 7/28/2019
Time for her to see Sandor again then.
magnus374 chapter 4 . 7/15/2019
A very strong and intense chapter. We had this melancholy feeling with the dream Sandor had of a good childhood. Then we had the horror of all those burned people.
bmthespian chapter 4 . 7/14/2019
Great chapter.
magnus374 chapter 3 . 6/16/2019
This chapter seems fitting too.
KarlKrow chapter 2 . 6/10/2019
Good! Can’t wait for more
Damna Alexis chapter 2 . 6/9/2019
I never thought about this possible couple and I'm already in love with this.
Hope you continue posting chapters here
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