Awesome ending. Very deep and fascinating and touching. Great work. Hope you write more fascinating stories.

Great story! I love Aspen already, and the plot is compelling. I think out of all your stories, this might be my favourite.

Fan fiction has this sort of freedom. No time restraints, personal involvement only, no animation, no voice acting required. Just as this story has. Just pure freedom ... and boy do I wish this was canon.

Not only did you add more character to not just Wasabi, Professor Granville, and Karmi, but also brought in a obscure character who was very enjoying to read about.

I was never much of a fan on the super hero genra, but this fan fiction has me interested. Doubt I’ll ever catch up on the story, but interested non the less.

Yeah, I’m pretty sure she’s just as much as eye candy as you said, but I can relate with something like the Shantae series. Eye candy, yes. Great characters, writing, and gameplay, YES!

Now I need to finally start up your new Hiro/Karmi story and hope the actual series goes more in deep in their characters.

A great and fun chapter. And judging from the Frednusin ice scene, Ithe reference has to be from Kingdom Hearts 3.

Esto es increíble, tienes una gran imaginación, de verdad espero leer la continuación lo antes posible.

Oh my gosh, this was AMAZING! Loved Aspen. I can’t wait for your next story. It’s sounds really interesting! Keep up the good work, you’re an awesome writer!

Amazing job! I really love how you concluded this story, it was emotional, interesting, and very fun! I can't wait to see the continuation of this story & especially to see what Relations Granville has with Silver Sablinova. Great job as always & I can't wait for the next one!

Increíble historia sin duda
eres el mejor
aunque... algo que se me olvido comentar en el review anterior, es sobre el apellido de Karmi
No pensé que le pondrías el mismo, creí que le pondrías uno similar
algo parecido, pero bueno, es tu fanfic y esta bien jeje xD
gracias por esta magnifica historia :3
espero actualices otro pronto :'D
hasta la próxima! :)

Incredible story without a doubt
you're the best
although ... something that I forgot to comment on in the previous review, is about Karmi's last name
I didn't think you'd put the same one on it, I thought you'd put a similar one on it
something similar, but hey, it's your fanfic and it's fine hehe xD
Thank you for this magnificent story :3
I hope you update another one soon :'D
until next time! :)

Yes Yes Yes! The story was incredible ! The farewell was so sweet and sweet, Aspen is a cinnamon roll and deserves the best! She deserves to discover the truth about herself. But, dear Aspen, do not ruin everything for Hiro. Speaking of him, the last part was very intense! Grandville went through a lot of stuff, just like Karmi. About the latter, I still have my theories about her, something about her last name is very important, and even if in her history she already has one, in the series the other may have a greater weight than imagined. I can not be the only one who finds it strange that Grandville and Karmi get on as well as if they had known each other for years! And bring more Karmi / Hiro story, yes, they are incredible! Can not wait!

Sorry to burst your bubble, but I figured from the beginning that Matthews wasn't Aspen's dad. It's kind've a common trope. But, I gotta say, loved the agent cameo. At first I actually thought that Granville had called the big man himself, but this is still pretty cool.

Great job! This truly was a great chapter & a great segway to the end. I'm really excited to see what you'll do with Aspen in the future, how you'll incorporate her into future stories. You really did outdid yourself with this story. Great job again & I can't wait until the next one!

The bald kid with an arrow on his head is Aang. But I don't get the Philip thing and also I wonder what happened to Killian?

Yes! Everything went well and nobody died! Miss Khan, eh? This must be the such cousin that was quoted in Immortals. It was intense enough, Aspen was meeting someone of her kind, saving everyone the participation of a certain SHILD agent and aspen almost killing someone. Normal in her stories with always, I really enjoyed this chapter and the relationship between Aspen and Wasabi was very cute and Karmi ... well, I hope she never changes. Poor Hiro, at least he had an apology this time. And the end, Grace in the interrogation, was incredible! I can not wait for the last chapter and the next story!

You always make good stories that deserve to be read. Too bad however that you made Captain Matthews the antagonist in the Aspen comic universe he isn't bad he is supporting her.

But aside from that you had made a very good story that one should enjoy reading no question.

Muy bien
Me alegra que todo haya salido bien :D
vaya, esta historia esta terminando muy rápido
pero valió la pena todo uwu
Kyyaahhh! la verdad, ya estoy esperando tu fanfic de Hiro y Karmi que publicaras pronto 7w7
lo estoy esperando con muchas ansias xD
como siempre, haces un excelente trabajo nwn
hasta la próxima! x3

very well
I'm glad that everything went well :D
Wow, this story is ending very fast
but it was worth all uwu
Kyyaahhh! The truth, I am waiting for your fanfic of Hiro and Karmi that you will publish soon 7w7.
I'm waiting for it xD
As always, you do an excellent job.
until next time! x3