Reviews for A Discordant Song
Fellow-Human9923 chapter 4 . 4/21
You're amazing! And you made m so much!
*Blinking away tears* Thank you sooooo much for giving this to the world!
Have a wonderful week! )
Alef15 chapter 4 . 3/20
Hello,

I cannot figure out the way to completely write what made me consider this story a masterpiece. But I am gonna try.
I understand very little about music, but your descriptions made me hear every crescendo, pianissimo, and string. All the story was knitted with the characteristical melody of Juleka's personality and it was developing just like a song, the characters were so full and so in-character on their age and the shaped behavior we have seen on the cartoon, and the story... a difficulty that starts like a snowball often becomes a great storm. You took every part and shaped it into a deep, emotional and simply wonderful story.

I just want to be fortunate enough to keep reading the beautiful and complex characters you build here. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 3/10
Cool four chapters
marketeerbubbles chapter 4 . 2/24
Wow, this is SO well written! you're a musician aren't you?
Mirage chapter 4 . 2/20
I really did like how you did write, how you made Juleka mariette and Luca...and i was terrible sad that maybe they do not become a pair, as she stil holds to adriens crush to see really see and hear Luca, and get there perfect Musical harmoy...but i really do hope...maybe in a Sequel of this Story? _ i mean Adrien is nice but he is sometimes to much of an follower to much a child who Needs to get a stable selfasured life, Luca is already very much well grow in his mind and Body and sure about him self and a good strong person so i hope he can woe and win marinette...i think she Needs someone like him, and he is great person_, adrien still has so many years to grow up...

How Juleca sees and hears things around her in Music in symphony and Songs is great_
Hope you write many more Story like this_
Brot'Quel chapter 4 . 1/20
This is... how can I say i?
Let me put it this way: if they ever were to adapt this fic into a mini-saga within the show... it will completely ruin the show.
The fact is, there had been great episodes in the past, right? And more often than not, each fan has a different favourite... but this fic... this is so good that everything coming after this will feel like a "downgrade" for the show!
You did a lot of great things like taking carachters more often than not forgotten and used the way they are to create a really great plot and mixed it with a fascinating writing style (love the constant music metaphorical speech) AND, to top it all, tou did manage to write a story that changed a great plot point from the show while keeping everything the same.
It could have been incredibly easy to turn this fic in another shot at the usual ship-war between the AdrieNette and the LukaNette pairings... but you didn't! You brought the story back to the starting point while still making a point in aknowlegdging something huge has changed.
This is honestly one of the best fic I've ever read, thank you for writing such a masterpiece and sharing it with this community.
P.S. Sorry for any error, english is not my main language.
Lucyole chapter 4 . 12/15/2019
love it really very interesting and one thing I want to see in the series how they find out all the crap Lila is pulling on them Juleka would be perfect for such an thing really great idea. and to be honest I'm a Marinette/Luka fan
Teh crush she has on Adrien looks a bit to obsessive to me not really healthy and he likes ladybug who is Marinette but he doesn't know it but as chat Noir he is too a bit to obsessed with them being destined for each other they don't know each other muh in and out of the mask so it doesn't look entirely healthy to me when they would end up together in the end just my opinion.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2019
It's so good. Only one word to describe this: beautiful. Truly, and utterly beautiful. I cannot express how reading this has cleansed my soul. Thank you for writing this.
PixelFairy2001 chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
One of the best stories ever 3 3 3
DragoonSensei chapter 4 . 9/16/2019
I realy adore Juleka
I think she is the most intresting student in the whole school in the show
suvblenin chapter 1 . 9/3/2019
This is great work so far. I really like the descriptions you used, they really set the mood you were trying to convey.
I was actually wondering if you wanted to join a discord that a friend of mine owns. It's for writers to share their work, get feedback, and offer tips and stuff. You can actually promote work too, if you're good enough. I think they'd be happy to have you. Here's the invite, if you want to check it out.
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Sonochu chapter 4 . 8/31/2019
I love this story. While I didn't always understand the musical vocabulary, it was an interesting thematic device all the same and excellently utilized. I also disagree completely with the earlier reviewer on Juleka. Characters are allowed to have flaws. This story was as much about her growing up as it was Marinette.

I would've liked to see more Luka admittedly, especially since he didn't really have any plot relevance besides helping to speak to Adrien, but otherwise this was an amazing story.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 4 . 8/27/2019
It was Absolutely Wonderful!
Juleka and Luka being so Great Support and Protective and Wonderful Badass!
Nino being awesome at play with situation to make Alix and some others realise the situation.
Adrien actually help so much after finally confronted by Luka and Juleka and want to help.
It was Absolutely Wonderful!
admirer chapter 4 . 8/19/2019
THIS HONESTLY WAS TRULY MAGNIFICENT!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/13/2019
This story is absolutely beautiful. Juleka's plan is very realistic, Marinette's decision to not forgive Alya right away is handled wonderfully, and I love watching Juleka and eventually Adrien and the others learn that they can be brave.

This is one of the best stories in the fandom. Thank you for writing it.
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