Reviews for The Young Veteran
PasiveNox chapter 10 . 7/29
Great wonderful
PasiveNox chapter 5 . 7/29
Yah great
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 7/29
Great great
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 7/29
Great
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 7/29
Noce
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14
Please let's not have the cowboy hat be a thing. Wearing them outside of a hot climate is no better than wearing a tin foil hat.

The essentially pairing fluff has been dull so far. Hard to care for a character who's essentially an OC with nothing noteworthy as apeealing other than being female.
BoredKing chapter 4 . 6/3
Are people really complaining that someone with 200 years of being a soldier is being too competent? What the would they expect, a bumbling idiot, or maybe a edgy, scary solder who is completely worthless in every situation so there is 'drama'? Please don't dumb Izuku down just to appease the idiots, author.
T6a5n6k8 chapter 5 . 5/25
people in texas disliking guns?
T6a5n6k8 chapter 5 . 5/25
here be dragons
*distant big sad noises*
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 10 . 4/26
Adorable. Love This Story!
Myyridian chapter 8 . 4/25
I'm about 99% sure that King of Blades, Deku is a reference to Starcraft 2's Queen of Blades Kerrigan to which i'm assuming he's gonna have similar abilities and an appearance similar to hers as well at some point if not right off the bat since Kerrigan was human before becoming the Queen of Blades.
PHXFlyte chapter 1 . 4/9
*Screams in [How the FUCK are you so good at writing]*
Xerzo LotCN chapter 10 . 4/7
that was great an izuku good also jojo reference
poor momo again also kats while an asshole is right mono could do so so much more with a quirk that can create anything she can do so much as well as imitation of quirks at risk of bodily harm cause no resistance

daw adorable fluff in videogames cooking and cuddles with a movie grow harem grow all the waifus delicious
FanFictionReaderIne chapter 10 . 4/7
Great to see this story being updated! This story is one of the best just because of the dialogue here. Every character feels believable and the banter between characters is just fun to see. Also the harem is awesome so far. Here it’s more than just collecting girls. The girls have their own opinions and reservations and it just makes this story so much more real. I’m personally here for the harem but I cannot wait to see what else you have in store!
willcraftNEX chapter 10 . 4/7
love it. the only thing i have to ask is will toru get into the green boi's harem, or will she just be a friend?

keep up the fantastic work!
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