love this story .
hope you r doing alright .
love to read more of your stories.

He should leave monogamies soon and hope he does not get the girls pregnant until the end of the story he can have sex but hope he can control when he pregnant a women.

Sachan is land of shadow not death

Harem please

So will this be Naruto leaving to rebuild Whirlpool?

We need an update plz

Please be honest with me here, Naruto isn't going to stay in Konoha is he? Considering what they are planning I don't think he would want to stay there any longer once he finds out. The only problem I can see with this is where would he settle down?

not bad so far, although I have one small gripe with the pairing. It's to big I'm worried ur characters and relationships wont be able to develop much cause of it, making this a smut story with no plot or character development. So I suggest u shorten it between 3-5 girls instead. This way they can all develop enough tht way so they wont feel so bland. Other than tht the story is good.

I like how the story is developing would love to see more chapters

Please update soon! This is to good to leave unfinished!

Good chapter, I want to see the next part.

Get well soon Blackspirit and keep us updated on Spirits conditions Melissa please and thank you.

cant wait for the old man to die

I don't think kami will let that slide so I cant wait to see that blow up in the old fuckers face

This story is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter also can u please do a Naruto lemon story about him only going out with kurenai and anko.