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KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 11 . 8/17/2019 Well Mrs. Caron definitely does her job nicely & professionally. Yes poor Adrien much built up anger, Gabriel you should have told me the com-paw-lete truth. Flashback Gabriel poorly handled telling Adrien, Emilie was "missing". Adrien while being forced to wait should call Nino or maybe Cat Noir could eavesdrop on their conversation. |
Hkt29 chapter 11 . 8/13/2019 More details about their past, the moment their relationship got screwed. |
Emma chapter 10 . 6/28/2019 I think Adrien heard the hawk moth part. I wonder if master fu is gonna tell Adrien and Marinette that hawkmoth is no longer a threat. It would be wise considering all of Paris still thinks he is and they have a somewhat fear of him. Ladybug and cat noir could send the message to Paris and put them at ease. I hope Adrien realizes that his father is trying to fix things and that they start to mend their relationship. It won’t be easy but I know it can happen. |
KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 10 . 6/28/2019 Well Kitty finally shows hiss dark claws. Duh Gabriel your going to have to work harder to fix things. Poor Kitty oh Adrien getting THAT angry it was bound to happen one day unexpectedly. But Plagg your Kitten's fury can't be at Gabriel can it? I mean Clumsinette Dupain-Cheng has something to do with Adrien's sour behavior too. This Mrs. Caron okay she sounds effective. But having to deal with those Agreste men she will need the patience of a saint. As usual Natalie you are brilliant. Try to relax Adrien before he's forced to go. Or he could clam up even more than now. But Plagg, really how are doing along with your Kitten? Has Master Fu talked your Kitten at all? That plus talking with Mrs. Caron hopefully will get Adrien back to hiss cattastic self. |
Hkt29 chapter 10 . 6/28/2019 It looks things won't be so easy to fix as happens in other stories, this Adrien acts like a normal teenager in those circumstances, he is not a living saint like his canon self. |
Emma chapter 8 . 6/25/2019 He doesn’t have any friends ha. I died at that. I’m so glad that someone made Gabriel a character development instead of him just being arrested. I’m glad he has seen the error in his ways and I’m glad that he changed them. Hopefully Adrien will eventually forgive him but not right away. How will cat noir and ladybug or even Paris react to hawk moth being gone. |
KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 9 . 6/27/2019 Awww... Nino you definitely Adrien's brotherly purrtector. A cat & hiss turtle a Miraculous sight indeed. See? Gabriel you always claimed Nino was a bad influence... HE'S THE COMPLETE OPPOSITE! I mean Gabriel so lost in his lonesome grief, he forgot all about sweet Adrien feeling his own pain. Gabe can't automatically change back to man he was before Emilie's "passing". The Agrestes men need closure, so no Gabe Natalie hasn't lost her mind. Purrlease working for you for so long, the woman has a will of steel to keep doing what she is currently doing. OF COURSE NATALIE IS COMPLETELY A 100% RIGHT! Gabriel you freed Nooroo "HawkMoth" is no more. Yet you should disclose that with Adrien solely. After all not only does Gabriel need to apologize to Adrien but FORMER HAWKMOTH NEEDS TO BEG FOR CATTASTIC KITTY CAT NOIR'S FUR-GIVENESS ME-OWRE! Plus Adrien so hurt & angry... could it be Ladybrat didn't reveal herself to Cat OR she did but didn't accept hiss love fur her after EVERYTHING still?! Plagg have talked to your Kitten or maybe Master Fu on things? |
Hkt29 chapter 9 . 6/27/2019 Nino was really mature in his talk with Gabriel. |
KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 8 . 6/26/2019 Natalie, seriously Gabriel would be lost without you. Old Gabe, actually sucked up his huge pride & egotistical points to talk to Nino. Well Agreste if there's someone whom understands Adrien better than anyone else (Plagg excluded of course. He knows hiss Kitten too well) it's Nino Lahiffe Cattastic Kitty's Turtle Sweet brother. ;) Bet Nino getting a call from Gabe was definitely NOT what he expected. |
deebeth89 chapter 8 . 6/25/2019 Well I like it well enough but you do have a weird bit you have walking pacing twice, I don't know why you have walking at all. |
Hkt29 chapter 8 . 6/25/2019 It will be awkward for both Nino and Gabriel to come with an agreement. Now that I think about it, Nino was in charge of the music during the fashion show in the Style Queen episode, it looks like Gabriel's company hired him for such important job. |
carolatavs chapter 7 . 6/24/2019 I think this was the best chapter so far. Thanks. I hope you'll update soon. |
myladypurrfect chapter 7 . 6/23/2019 . |
KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 7 . 6/22/2019 Did Gabriel really expect a different reaction?! Adrien is over hurt & hidden emotional possible mental pain. So Adrien nearly screaming at him it's understandable. Natalie call Nino have him talk to his brother. Or really Gabriel should talk to Nino himself. Nino knows Adrien more than anyone. (Well better than everyone... EXCLUDING PLAGG)! Plagg talk to your Kitten. |
Hkt29 chapter 7 . 6/22/2019 Nice that Adrien didn't jumped at the chance to be with his father, forgiveness must be earned. |