Super. Can't wait for more.

Thankd

Thanks

I don't exactly remember which chapter this was but with a lot of french words you put 2 e depending on the gender like enchaté for men and enchantée for woman

Hello, me again, again. I'm not sure if I missed errors in the previous chapters or if this one had more then the first three. Anyways, I don't think I've said it yet but I'm really enjoying your story. Tuesdays are my busy day and I hope I can read more then a single chapter tomorrow. Regardless, onto the small grammar/ spelling errors I found:
"how did they do managed in so short time" should be corrected to read something like,how did they managed to do this in such a short time?"
During the Hermione and Ron verbal spat, "Everything always go to him!" should be corrected to, "Everything always goes to him!" just makes the sentence flow a bit better in my opinion. "I grew up in a big, beautiful, empty house Ronald" is a sentence I made combining the two you had with Hermione's reply to Ron, commas allow some great tone setting possibilities of you let them. Here's another twosome correction, "I would give all to have (a) brother who cared!" and, "You don't know what (it's)like to be alone!" I also see an issue with you ending dialouge with commas versus periods, exclamation points or question marks, dialouge should almost always end with some form of non-comma based punctuation. Most of the issues I saw with this chapter was your constant use of commas rather then using different punctuation in dialouge. You use some words correctly like combining, 'you' and 'are' into 'you're' but you don't always use the right form of these words for the tone of your story. That's just my opinion on it though. Thanks for writing this story and I'm excited to see what you have happen next, especially with how you handle the Harry v Ron conflict.

Excited to see task 2!

enjoying each and every step, looking forward to the next steps!

Amazing! So wrapped up in reading I forgot to review each chapter. The relationships and conversation btw each main character (Harry-Hermione, Harry-Fleur) do such a good job showing how each character feels (sibling, friend to growing more)
Can’t wait to read more!

Late to the party but fun start, enjoying the narration.

Love the story! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hello, me again, you'll probably see my name pop up a a few more times while I read and review your story. The dialouge in this chapter felt off too. When you had McGonagall comfort Harry you wrote, "Mr. Potter, Harry you could very well die" the line(s) above when you introduced McGonagall, you did make sure McGonagall's dialouge was more formal due to her character, but I'm not sure why you added a line between the two lines both said by McGonagall. Your first sentence of the chapter was almost beautifully written, then you separated it with a period. "I've been through a lot of shitty, dangerous and especially odd happenstance in* and around this castle but not once have I seen this look of utter disappointment on Dumbledore's face." i feel like this sentence sounds a bit better even though it is longer. I am interested to see what happens next. I did see that the judges said no external help, I wonder if that includes friends or if they were just referring to the teachers. The Trio's all together approach could be dashed instantly of so.

I feel like the dialog of this chapter was odd at times. you used "cause" early on, then used "you are" vs "you'reand in my opinion that makes for jarring dialouge at times. It was a short chapter, not much else to review in it.

I wasn't sure about the first person perspective but I think you've nailed it here. Glad I saw this as a recommended story. I'm interested to see how and when Fleur realizes she _did_ meet Harry Potter.

This is really well written, your dialogue is quite natural. Your characters actually sound like they're speaking to each other rather than taking at one another. Either way I've been enjoying reading it and hope it will continue!

Quite a nice chapter. Katie is gold as usual, with her witty remarks and taking the lead dancing. Rewlly enjoyed this one. #flowerpot

It's good. A few lingiustic quirks that distract though.