I reasaaaallyyyyyy Like it really good

Great chapter is good to have u back :D

With that being said I do still enjoy this fanfiction and I am happy that Marco is realizing his major fuck up and regretting it as he realizes Starco was not worth it. Again I do feel it gor very excessive for the past few chapters but awell. Do enjoy the places they go and this adventure OS good with character development in most parts. Keep up the good work with this fanfiction cause you are succeeding.

So is this the shit on Marco show cause I get he made lots of mistakes but this feels excessive. Guess you hold lots of bitterness for him for that whole finale thing but some of the other girls are getting annoying with the insult Marco to the point I am not liking the possibility of him being with them. Sorry but they along with Greedy Heart need to get off of their high horses and shut the fuck up for awhile.

Oh man i feel for Marco he's the kind of guy that has to be told a girls feelings or he won't know. And with how the girls are acting you'd think they'd just tell him instead of blaming him just a little. Plus Marco was always the shy guy so...

Can't wait for the next chapter very few fanfics or books can entrahll me so.

Reaaaally good chapters, even of i am late for the party
Keep it goin that way mate
I love this history

Great chapter

Well this was a fun chapter and yea I'm sure Janna is mellow now compared to her younger days. Also someone please give Jackie like five hundred hugs and free therapy...

i don't know what to say other than good job.

Great chapter . I wonder how Marco being half-Mexican dint understood the Chaparro . We intrigued holy I hope next chapter gets out soon :D

Well Hpoo is learning more about her new condition. And we get a deeper hint at how Marco and Hpoo interacted with each other. Janna is so going to find a loop to through Marco through...

When’s the next chapter this is a good fic

show me the lemons!

can i just say that you're managing this story amazingly