I think Obi Wan or Yoda are going to have some words for Luke when it comes to Blake as it's obvious their going to eventually develop feelings for each other down the line and the last time a Skywalker fell in love resulted in the Republic being turned into the Empire and the jedi order destroyed. I very much doubt they want to risk another crapshow happening again.

If Blake acts Imperial enough she might convince the detention block guards to let them in without a fight.

Blake disguised as an Imperial officer?! Nice! Oh, please give her dual DC-17's.

Is that clone Bacara?

Oh please have Galen's clone, Captain Rex, The Bad Batch, Rahm Kota, Fordo/Arc-77 and Ahsoka in this story. Plus, don't be afraid to add the things you would have loved to have happen in the series. Oh, for the Clones please get rid of their accelerated aging.

Love it! Knowing Blake, I can tell she's not gonna like this upcoming line.
Security officer: (eying Chewie with both suspicion and disdain) "Where are you taking this... thing?"
Blake has at least one reason to hate the Empire, its xenophobic as well as genocidal.

Nice variation. On the story now all we have to do is get past things on the security. Detention level .

You know, I kinda did see Blake having to wear an Imperial Officer’s uniform as a disguise coming. The whole idea of just two stormtrooper escorting two prisoners within the Death Star would’ve been a bit too suspicious.

Though saying that, I am interested if Colonel Wullf Yularen will notice something strange about Blake when they pass each other on their was to the prison block? As the highest ranking member of the ISB on the Death Star, it’s his job to weed out what doesn’t belong.

Anyways, great story. Best of luck for it’s and your future.
Till next.

(Side Note: With how expansive Star Wars was, the fact that you described an Imperial Officer “nameless” amuses me more then it really should.)

I can't wait to see Leia and Blake interacting with each other.

Some grammar issues, but not enough to ruin the chapter. Soon, Blake will see a being far more frightening than both Adam and the Grimm combined. Who's breathing will haunt the nightmares of anyone unlucky enough to see him.

Yep I definitely ship Luke and Blake

I bet Tie Fighters are going to suck for Blake as that screech noise they make along with her Faunus trait it's going to hurt. One of the downsides of super hearing.

Im not much of a shipper and more interested in the story but the interaction between Luke and Blake makes me want a ship. Plus Luke deserves happiness seeing what happens to him in the sequels. Of course if this is a planned thing I want it to happen naturally and not them immediately making out after the Death Star exploded.

I want to first say there is a grammar mistake at the very end "But Since" should be But since.
Now I do enjoy this chapter and looking forward to the Death Star rescue, with Blake at their side it make it more easy for them as she is skilled in infiltration and stealth. Sure the Stormtrooper helmets will be very uncomfortable to wear as her car ears will be cramped but their is no other way. By the end of A New Hope and her officially joining the Rebel Alliance she will prove invaluable in the fight against the evil Empire and the Dark side that shrouds the galaxy.

I love the Obi Wan line of taking a first a step into a larger world as it feels like it's also directed to the audience as this is the beginning of a grand adventure, of a battle between good and evil, of love and friendship, of many perils and stumbles that make our heroes feel doubt and fear yet hope shining in their hearts push them to continue on in the fight to defeat the evil that threatens all. We have now taken that first step alongside our heroes and boy what an adventure it will be, I love Star Wars and always will.