Nice chapter, by the way!

I really like the start of the chapter and also Hotaru mother's concerns are reasonable. Her daughter almost die a few times and she doesn't want her daughter to do this but it won't stop Hotaru from trying to be a heroine so she has to trust her.

Erdos using this chance for revenge and gain a new Shadow Pokemon. But you know what else I liked; he snapped. He felt humiliated the last plan backfire and Hotaru won when she was clearly finished.

The trip went well for Hotaru and gang to figure out it is a Tyrantrum that somehow came out from the Pokemon world... or was sleeping in the planet? It is a Fossil Pokemon so it makes sense. Anyway Hotaru must fight this giant fossil by becoming a giant mon too. Aurous' first appearance and stands tall being a massive threat. Suicune wouldn't do much or Lucario by the size of the Fossil mon so fight big with BIG.

The fight goes as such with the two giant mons going at the other while Hotaru and the others fend off Cipher soldiers from trying to catch the T-Rex mon. It worked but Erdos arrived blasting Hotaru by the back. Very cowardly. Still it backfire hard plus Ice Beam would have likely kill him in his helicopter. AND Venomica would be UNABLE to do anything to the Rock-Ice type especially if Hotaru uses Rock Slide or Head Smash... or Blizzard.

Anyway after losing her tail, Hotaru got the win with a ice powered up Hyper Beam (NICE) and got her the win. Latios and Latias take the fossil mon back to their world to avoid problems. Good day overall.

... Oh... boy... that sure makes sense to have a Chinese Cousin... SIGH... Till next time.

At least this chapter was great! I really liked it and just being Hotaru doing her own fight.

Okay, time for another good chapter of Hotarumon 14!

Good first scene with Ashley and Hotaru having a lovely time being together. The worst part is that demons of Venomica spotted them together and this gave Venomica the perfect trap, shape shifting as Hotaru and with Erdos' assist; the trap is set.

I don't see why Hotaru would wait after classes to save Ashley. Anyway, Hotaru later arrives and the trap is unleashed with her Sylveon form going up against Metagross... OH this is bad and Hotaru somewhat manages even with Venomica in the way... until Erdos Mega Evolves it... WELL... Hotaru is dead.

Would be but Ashley saved her and through not wanting Ashley to die, Hotaru gains a massive buff like a Z-Move and defeated Mega Metagross and harm Venomica badly. Through the power of love, Hotaru turn the tide and she and Ashley are safe.

Amazing chapter!

Finally, another original story. I love it this Fossil Pokemon on rampage! I can't wait for next time!

At least you came back to this story but calling it short... sort of.

Hotaru recovered and Ashley offers that they should hang out and also to express her feelings for her... however Cipher has problems with a Shadow TOTEM Mimikyu escapes and goes on a rampage, in the same day as Hotaru and Ashley's girls day out.

Hotaru did not do well that the Mimikyu chase at her and forced her to become Raichu... probably one of the worst picks for her and Mimikyu enrages even more, bringing out a wild Haunter. AT THE LEAST... it wasn't a Gengar. The battle was bad for Hotaru, again... but you know what, even though she was stabbed through the stomach, Hotaru handled the fight pretty well. This means her "Level" has went up good. This helped her to beat Mimikyu and a little luck.

And then the confession... I should mention I like Ashley worrying for Hotaru before the fight and uttering out her feelings. I would have liked Hotaru speechless but also blushing that she does feel the same. The final scene was beautiful and perfect... like a certain commission!

Steamy and special indeed... but for Venomica, it will be a key point in killing Hotaru. But will that work? Let's find that out next time.

Just warn in the start of the chapter that it could be M-Rated, don't change the rate of the story. I'll give you an example in DKR.

It's bad that Hotaru was in her Sylveon form, badly weaken, to deal with Venomica and her deathly poisonous fangs... YES PALMER, very obvious.

At least Ashley saved her and I did like that also Shadow Garchomp because it was the perfect pick for Hotaru to use Draining Kiss to recover a huge ton of her strength again... except Venomica still poisoned her and Erdos figure out that only Steel and Poison types harm Hotaru in her Sylveon- I miss Danny and Kimberly. At least they would do something than McGee and Abby just... ramming Cipher soldiers... sigh... I can't wait for Ben or Static Shock. I'll be honest, weakest team up because Venomica is too OP and should have killed all the humans first. Like Evangeline vs pff... US Army. HAHA... no, they're all dead and Evangeline laughs at their frozen corpses.

Moving on... No... no... NCIS was the worst chose to have Hotaru put up to fight a Garchomp but now Toxicrok while she's still recovering and Venomica there too. Bad idea Redwall, really bad idea. It's like... Volume 2 DKR Yugi vs Pain- Yugi dies. Like with Itachi, it was different. He won't kill him, far from it since Itachi is well you know. But Pain-oh no, Pain would have killed Yugi and Ichigo instead. Why do you think I waited to introduce Sailor Moon by Volume 4. Like Yugi would not win and die pretty sure. Hell Deep Blue was still much stronger than Yugi before getting Dragon Slayer mode.

*Flashbacks of Katie's death* NO... NO WHY THE HEADSHOT! GOD DAMN IT. At least after so much chasing, the real VIP was Ashley with her magic. If not for her, Hotaru would be dead-dead in this chapter. And even then Erdos reveals who he is and man this is dumb. What was the point of being a teacher then? Damn it, damn it all.

Good... It's done. Good... chapter. At least things were resolve... though four hours, kinda doubt it. I will say the only thing I like was Hotaru's father accepting his daughter and her duties as... a hero... who didn't beat the Shadow Pokemon and almost died... with Jenny in DKR when she learned Yugi's secret like the others, she knew she can't forbid him because Yugi would risk his life for others especially his friends so she decided to train him to be a better Dragon Knight so he doesn't end up dead. Hell Alien Force did it better with Ben's parents learning the truth. Whatever...

Next time should be more interesting but please, warn everyone from the start it's a M-Rated, sex scene chapter so you don't get in trouble Redwall. Okay?

I'll rant a bit... Hotaru's father not having a first name upsets me. That's all.

So it's nice how hard it is for Hotaru to fully accept that now her father and many NCIS agents and allies are aware of her identity. I mean her father will question a LOT of this stuff but right now they have other problems and Hotaru is badly injury from the fight.

Venomica would laugh at this Gibbs and just mind control him, shoot his team and then himself. Like that terrorist guy is an idiot to think a NAGA-LAMIA SNAKE QUEEN THAT'S PART DEMON SUCCUBUS, can't beat Gibbs. Oh boy, it's like um Captain America beating Goku... boy does that look silly when Goku knocks him out and he sweat drops that he sort of overdid it there. Geez... I like everything else about the scene as those terrorists are idiots to not assume Hotaru could be Flygon and Venomica excited to devour her.

I like Ashley's plan... but that ain't going to be enough. I can see Gibbs and the others holding off the Terrorists and Cipher soldiers but up against Shadow Pokemon... nope, they're dead. And worst if Venomica sees through this trap and joins in. Hotaru might not be enough. *eyes a certain hero* Well if he shows up next chapter... then that would be a different story... OH... or Magic Force hmm.

ABBEY?! YOU WANT HER TO BE VENOMICA MOUSE HUNT?! Freaking geez... At least they have a car or else... I'm not surprised Venomica can smell and know that's not Hotaru and proceeds to end the game with the real Hotaru. This is honestly the worst cliffhanger not that it was bad, it was really good but Hotaru can't do anything. It's like remember in Tokyo Mew Mew that Ichigo got sicked, Kish still went after her, she transformed but she was so sick that it affected her Mew form... the same will likely happen to Hotaru. She'll need real help for once, just saying.

... Honestly, Hotaru has no chances if a surprise happens that saves her... power-up time? Guess we'll find out for next time. Also good chapter too.

Hmm... militia, so imagine these guys going up against Hotaru and they're just outgun, like what will bullets do to a Grass Type Seperior. I would imagine they'll hit through her but she just blinks regenerating the damage and not even taking any major damage, then proceeds to Leaf Blade their weapons SO EASILY like cutting through butter but nope, the Glare was MUCH MORE effective but that's me seeing people with guns going up against a Pokegirl or transformation.

Did we ever get Hotaru father's first name? Hmm... Anyway seems someone is targeting his daughter and so best he asked a favored on Special NCIS Agent Gibbs and his team to help discovered who and why are trying to kidnap Hotaru. This should be interesting...

And we learn why because Erdos was smart enough to take those militias to his base to learn of their intentions. Like why would Cipher be scared of NCIS? They have SHADOW POKEMON, sometimes getting lucky to get Shadow forms of Legendaries or Mythicals who are stronger than regular Shadow Pokemon. Like imagine Dark Leader Dragon going up against the United States military, no competition except well... I won't say much but yea. Anyway, Erdos uses these men so they all get what they want.

Wow Tony really? Predictable like you are. Anyway Gibbs team are basically tailing on Hotaru until they figured out where the militias would attack again... shame Hotaru couldn't captured them properly if not for Cipher. Now she has to avoid transforming but we don't know that ain't happening. I mean they have Tony and Ziva... *eyes Venomica* Oh... f**k, yea, they could be doomed.

McGee should have seen when he seen the Seperior. "Oh boss, that's a Pokemon" and Gibbs just gives him a look and smacks him by the back of the head.

Anyway the chase becomes a Shadow Pokemon battle with Hotaru going Flygon against Garchomp... and honestly I do agree might vs might won't work since Garchomp is a much stronger and faster Ground/Dragon type than Flygon and yea, Hotaru may have had an advantage by the Sandstorm but not against Garchomp. It's like Pidgeot vs Staraptor... Staraptor STRONGER. So Hotaru loses though the Garchomp retreated as did the terrorists.

The sad part is that Hotaru's secret has been exposed and no doubt Venomica will plan to kill her soon under her conditions.

OH... OH... bad day to be Hotaru right now. I don't want to imagine how well Hotaru's father will handle that his daughter is playing hero. I mean remember in Alien Force when Ben's parents learned of Ben's heroics. They didn't take it well at first, they did later. Well we'll see for next time then.

Good chapter, liked it all about it.

Okay, it's time.

Venomica's plan is simple and effective... wish Erdos didn't jinx her in the process. Eh regardless it wouldn't have work.

Anyway I liked Ashley's surprise when she was nak-ed not remembering how and her calling Hotaru about their hang out. Them chatting even with Ashley still under both enemies' control was actually nice, they haven't been hanging out as much due to the fights and battles they've went through so it was nice of them to hang out like this... even though this was all a trap.

The checkers game was great with Ashley drugging Hotaru while she's distracted and the strip-cooking scene was good too. Venomica had won but her one mistake was how strong Ashley felt for Hotaru and who she is. If there was a scene like Hotaru telling Ashley that even though she her parents die, she's no longer alone; then that would cause Ashley to slowly break free.

D-did Hotaru as Ninetales use Flash? Just curious as it would make sense to temporary blind Venomica badly. Even so Hotaru was still weakened and Ashley was still brainwashed.

HOWEVER thanks to the power of friendship and garlic, Ashley unlock a new spell (Magic Force Level 4 Magic spell at this point) that can and will kill demons, even Venomica so she better be careful for next time and she has no choice but to be careful.

YES... further evolves "wink-wink". I look forward to that!

Oh... oh McGee will be all nerd mode, Abby too and Tony will rub his head in shame, Ziva confused and Gibbs asking "What the hell is a Pokemon?". OH GOOD TIMES THOSE WILL BE... Um... for that chapter, try to avoid Queen Venomica (because how do the explain that to NCIS agents), use more of Hotaru's father and let it be more like Erdos or/AND Miror B's plot, or the other Cipher agent wanting to get rid of Hotaru too.

Okay last part to this story.

Plus as Suicune, Hotaru can run on water like a ninja and possible better with swift speed. I also liked that as smart Erdos is, Venomica is much more smarter than him especially having her own attack on Hotaru's friends while she and Kim are dealing with other side.

Oh wow, capturing a Raikou and also the plan of Shadow people is something... is it just me or do I want Raikou to return because he might have a crush on Hotaru but as Suicune. He shows his affection by biting her butt but by nibbling.

Anyway the battle becomes very badly for Hotaru but taking a gamble, she uses Mirror Coat to turn the tables and defeated the Shadow Pokemon. It was a close call too but luckily she was a Legendary so she could took more hits than her. Suicune proved her worth... though I'm surprised no Sheer Cold to freeze ALL the targets at the same time as a KO. Man that would be something.

Oh interesting cliffhanger. Good chapter! So next time will be that. I will look forward to it!

Hmm... don't mess with Ashley. Well her parents were part of Magic Force so yea. Anyway, Hyper Beam reflection with Sylveon did the charm... for the training. Will be more something when we get there.

So the villains are plotting and the heroes are readying themselves for their next showdown which is good. Yea, I'm blank sorry. This is a good chapter. I like Daniel's suggestion to Hotaru to use Sylveon against Venomica due to her own weakness BUT I'm more happy to see Suicine's debut. I love the line of Hotaru feeling the strength she feels from her transformation, Legendary and all.

Next time will be more interesting how Hotaru and Kim will handle 5 Shadow Pokemon and their villains.

This was an interesting chapter... but unlike DP that I am a fan of and the other series you will later put here... I know very little to nothing with Kim Possible because of well... depends on the place I was living, the channels and time I could watch stuff and other reasons.

Anyway, great idea Hotaru to reveal one of your weaknesses as Lucario to the unknown enemy.

Stealing, not steeling. Also I saw Miror B... OH BOY, I kinda wish I had a Gamecube to play that game. BOY OH BOY. So Venomica is questionable why she knows these villains but Daniel too is... okay. Anyway, Cheerleader Competition goes chaotic, heroines met and cliffhanger. Good chapter, I liked it even though I have no clue. Good chapter anyway.

Yes... the rematch... Neat...

I don't know if it matters or not who came up with the plan if it's going to be Cipher's best interest to get rid of Hotaru's friends so she can suffer and be more alone. Like even the Dark Lord would do that at first... then again, he would see her friends suffer more if Hotaru dies instead. Alright, this is fine and I like the first scene being that to target Hotaru's friends now.

... A brain surgery would kill her. You're in a world of technology with a helmet that could erase those parts of Loveria's memory of Ardos being a Cipher agent instead. The rest of that scene was fine... still Ardos could have killed Loveria but then again, she was a former- WHY NOT BRAINWASH HER TO WORK FOR CIPHER AGAIN AS A DOUBLE SPY WITHIN HOTARU'S GROUP.

ANYWAY Cipher commence their "Adros isn't Cipher/Miror B's revenge" plan and Hotaru goes all Ninja Butterfree pretty awesome! I like the sneak attack approach she did taking care of the Cipher Soldiers, one by one like she was Batman and Spiderman put together. Anyway, Miror B commence his fight against her with the same Shadow Pokemon that gave her problems last time plus a Shadow Manectric. This was overwhelming for Hotaru but unlike last time with Butterfree, she overcame all three of them and beat Miror B, though he got away.

Well Ashley has a lot to work to do to restore Loveria now but this chapter was alright!

SO... Yea... Don't ask me much about Kim Possible... I was in an Era in which I never watched it and MAYBE I should have... but stuff happen. Oh yea, I didn't have Disney during that time. SO YEA... next time should be interesting but like how you have no idea what Kamen Rider is, I'm going to make a face not sure what it is but I'll try to enjoy it.

First error... Emergency, not Emergancy. Best you change that Redwall.

Why not a bed? A table is very uncomfortable.

Anyway Ashley healed Hotaru but she still needed to rest. I like the argument they had and Hotaru listens to her, trusting her friend's word... the kiss was pushing it but well that just means Hotaru trusts Ashley that much more.

Loveria prepares to sacrifice herself to save Hotaru's mother captured like her to pay Hotaru back even if she ends up dying instead.

Hotaru recovers fully and prepares the rescue mission... with Sylveon... OOF. She could have used Flygon but I guess she has no choice at this point but to trust her instincts.

Well at the least she didn't have to face Miror B this time as Latios and Latias distraction from Daniel left the majority of Cipher Soldiers stunned giving Hotaru the chance to save Loveria well after her mother learned the truth. Pretty good she figure it out since Ashley and Daniel were there already and put two and two together to know her daughter is the monster girl heroine. Not bad.

Anyway, Hotaru had another major fight with Venomica but with Loveria's help, she managed to fight her off and left her stunned to give herself and her group the escape they needed.

NOW things are better, per say and Loveria and Hotaru can be friends. NEAT. This will come in handy especially since Loveria knows a certain professor of Hotaru isn't all that he seems to be.

Rematch of the century? The guy will lose again, big shocker. Looking forward to it though. Also it can't be called rematch of the century unless the two had multiple battles against the other... LIKE... Optimus and Megatron. THOSE TWO if they ever have a rematch is a rematch of the century. Or Yugi VS Kaiba Round 5... Or even against the Dark Lord after a few Volumes.

This was a good chapter, a lot of character moments and relationships "friendship" are made. Good chapter!

So Loveria- You can't be in a coma for 5 hours. That is impossible, you can be in a coma for days or weeks... years, even a whole day, but you can't be in a coma for 5 years.

Anyway, Erdos needs to capture her back so he'll use Ground and underground attack to get her back and get rid of Hotaru too. Also we see Loveria slowly changing side but pure fear of Venomica going to devour her, which was done better than the coma part.

So the attack happen, Hotaru vow she won't let Loveria get eaten and well that didn't turn out well with the Rain Dance and her first time with Ninetales backfire hard. Plus Venomica captured Hotaru's mom forcing Hotaru to use Latios and Latias who couldn't save her and now both her and Loveria will get cooked with Hotaru badly hurt. It was good... I'm just tired of your vore fetish. It's annoying Redwall, sorry. Wanted to say it.

... Thanks... a real gift is not uploading this story today and maybe tomorrow... but whatever, good chapter.

I'll be honest, I didn't like how this chapter ended but whatever, it was fine. Good chapter Redwall, looking forward to how Hotaru will save her mother and Loveria as well as try to find a way around the

Time for the epic conclusion to the first crossover story.

This was mostly a huge brawl with Hotaru using her Absol transformation for the first time with Danny to fight a whole group of villains and even with Latios and Latias, it was still a hard fight with Queen Venomica being the worst one to overcome, even after Absol can slash her down almost in half only for her to regenerate each time.

Sadly having been trying to avoid a bite, Hotaru does get bitten just after taking down Shadow Spiritomb. At least she had Latias giving her a hand and Danny as they fight back when Venomica use that sandstorm move and then the distraction play which worked out so well.

If I had one thing I didn't like was why Erdos commanding Venomica to release Sam and Jazz. Like that didn't make much sense he could use them- then again Danny would try something like duplicate himself unaware by all and rescue the two. It's weird that part.

Good chapter it was! I liked it. Well at least next time we get Hotaru and Loveria about to become friends. Yea?! Should be good!

It's strange to see a Flygon ride a Latias but at this point I'm not questioning. It's interesting Hotaru, Danny and the Eon Siblings arrived to Venomica's home which is almost like a steamy hell. Good thing Hotaru is in the right form for this rescue mission to save Loveria.

Huh? Didn't know there were more Succubus Nagas, guess they're low level and see Venomica or any children she could have as their masters. Anyway, after the electric barrier that Hotaru rip apart, they appeared to get in our heroes way. WELL... technically Succubus Nagas using guns makes no sense and being part ground makes the poison not so effective for Hotaru, but whatever.

So there are ghost in Venomica's world, probably dead Nagas or humans who died by them. That explains much, and nice Outrage moment for a berserk Hotaru. And also the pet Flygon idea too hehe which helped Danny and Hotaru to evade problems and reach Loveria AND geez, she was treated horribly! FOR ONE BAD QUESTION.

Anyway our heroes barely manage to help Loveria to escape with the alarms at full volume. Loveria was taken to the hospital but not before telling them what Vlad and Venomica is up to and right away confront the two villains and Absol! Very awesome!

Part 4?! Well this is going to be an interesting conclusion! Can't wait!