This actually reminds me of Supernatural. Though, I never watch it but it's good just like the start of chapter.

Great story, so far. Can't wait to see with you have in store for future chapters.

I guess I'll be the third guy to say it; love Lucy's design. I do like the story you're telling here as well, as a fan of the fantasy genre. Supernatural was a great show (personally it fell off for me around Season 5, but that's not the point).

I feel bad for Lily at the end. Sucks that she's freaking out. Hope Lincoln and Lucy can calm her down in the next chapter, which I will be looking forward to ;)

Lol I just realized I totally scewed up the ages of the mcs. To clarify, Lincoln is 21 Lucy is 18 and Lily is 11. Sorry for the confusion, Ill change it now. Boy does this guy suuuuck. XD

I agree that finding out what the other characters turned into and how to help them will be more fun as a surprise. As for the chapter, I'm liking how Lily is being portrayed as a kid who grew up with so many siblings, even with getting a dragon's abilities sealed inside her. Let's hope that Lincoln and Lucy can help with her major freakout. I'm thinking a good way of calming her down is showing them what they turned into or revealing a more benevolent side of the supernatural. It would help show off what Lincoln and/or Lucy became before and how their curses were broken.

I think making them more linear and fleshed out would be a good idea and explain what has happened over the years and how all these monster have appeared.

But still keep up the good work and hope to see more soon.

Like the first reviewer had said; I dig Lucy's design as well. Tank tops? Shorts? Fishnet leggings? Seems like a hot gothic teenager to me. Truth be told, I'm just a sucker for Lucy.

I also like her personality; more importantly, I like the backstory about Silas tried to plow her. Seems like Lucy enough. She always had the heart for vampire. That is why I called her 'Lincoln's little vampire' it is a cute petname by the way.

The theme is nice, and I'm not a fan of Supernatural but I know the story well enough. Besides, its not like I had to watch the series to understand your story, right. Anyway, good starter.

Question; how old are they? Is this Lucycoln? Sorry, I had to ask that. I'm a pervert, I know.

Definitely an interesting start and it's got me wanting to read more. I like Lucy's design for this story because it makes sense for her to have blue eyes, tattoos when she's older, and an outfit like that.

My main complaint is that it's a little confusing to have the characters immediately in the action. I hope that you have a chapter or two that explains how everything started. I'm looking forward to more of this fic.