Reviews for Yu-Gi-Oh! The Sodor Chronicles (Extended)
John Wilkins chapter 26 . 9/23
Good for Emily, to stand up for herself in front of that Barry punk. And I'm glad that David Ryder now fully trusts Thomas now. I'm guessing the newspaper of Thomas and Emily was from after winning The Couple's Cup. That must be now Thomas's fourth Duel King title, while it's Emily's first ever Duel Queen title. Who knows? She could be Thomas's Queen Of Games. Anyway, in real life, just like the Thomas himself, I too treat women and girls with respect for who they are as people and earn their trust while doing so, even though I have autism. One of my best friends also have autism, but also has a good body. We go to a club together with other autistic people for special needs and last Valentine's Day before the lock-down, a lot of males were giving her Valentine's cards and gifts, because they like her looks. Although she's a bit OK with the cards and gifts, she finds it weird. For me, we've known and trust each other for over 10 years and she knows I never talk or think about her body, because it's just not my style to do something like that. When I gave her my card last Valentine's Day, she was happy the way I was treating her and gave me a hug in return. In other words, another good story (chapter).
AaronCottrell97 chapter 26 . 9/22
The wait was well worth it, though I couldn't help noticing that two or so lines in Turn 4 were left unfinished. Also, would've preferred if you described the outfits Barry was envisioning just after "Bronze Warrior" received the 3000 ATK in more detail, rather than just saying that some are revealing, would've done a better job emphasizing why Emily is against it in general if we had a better image in our heads. Apart from that, loved it.
John Wilkins chapter 25 . 9/19
Wow, Percy. And I thought James was a hothead. I'm sure Thomas and Emily will feel a bit calm, after a goodnight sleep. Thomas has been like a brother to all his friends. I'm sorry for being so dumb, SF64Rules91, but I can't remember if PTSD is the same as mental health. At the start of 2016 in January, I had mental health issues and needed time to recover. In anyway, Lady's own adventure continues (or starts, since she just left). I wish her well and although I've got a small amount of doubts of her and Burnett being in Season 6, I hope she comes home to the team soon. And speaking of Burnett Stone, SF64Rules91, since he's in this chapter, I hope you don't mind me saying and paying my respects. God bless Peter Fonda. RIP, mate.
AaronCottrell97 chapter 25 . 9/18
OK, title is a clear reference to "BROOKYLN RAGE!" from the Abridged Series, well played, well played. I get that Percy was supposed to be the epitome of overreacting rage, but god, did I want to stomp him in the nuts repeatedly at one point, because he does not deserve my sympathy, which again, I know that was the entire point and that it has to be this way, but it's blown up to proportions that are near impossible for me to view Percy as sympathetic here...for the record, I'm not saying change anything, just saying Percy isn't earning any sympathy points.
John Wilkins chapter 24 . 9/13
GG (Good Game), Emily and Mavis. Despite losing, Mavis has a good teacher. Specking of which, while Emily's teaching Mavis about her Deck, I wonder if Dark Magician Girl's teaching the-now-feeling-much-happier Magician's Valkyria about human behaviour, at the same time? I'm still eager to see an artwork picture of what Norse Valkyria looks like, from top of her hair, to the toe of her boots. As well as the Magician's Secrets Spell Card.
AaronCottrell97 chapter 24 . 9/12
And we finally see how Mavis got into the game, and another win for Emily is always a plus.
John Wilkins chapter 23 . 8/26
I really both loved and enjoyed this chapter. In fact, in my autistic-mind, I both loved and enjoyed it so much, I think I'll one day draw a fan-art picture of both Thomas and Emily in the clothes they were in for their... ..."date". But,.. ...I DON'T have a DeviantART account. So, if you both want and like to see my fan-art, I can only send it to you on Facebook Messenger. I wonder if there were any boy and girl co-singing songs at the music shop those two both like? Also, I wonder what sort of movie they went to see at the cinema? Another brilliant job-well-done on another story (chapter) you've created, SF64Rules91. Loved it.
AaronCottrell97 chapter 23 . 8/24
A nice, fun chapter with another early win for Emily.
John Wilkins chapter 22 . 8/6
Now we know how Thomas got his first kiss from Emily. So how did he get Molly's kiss in early high school? Was it during Emily's suffering (as much as I hate to ask that question)?
AaronCottrell97 chapter 22 . 8/5
Pretty sweet, which was what I was expecting it to be.
John Wilkins chapter 21 . 8/1
Now Mavis finally gets her lips on Thomas's face. LOL! It's the second time Molly's kissed him, since the first was back in early high school (mentioned in Season 1 Chapter 32). I've lost count how many times Rosie's kissed him. I think it's her second time too. I could be wrong. Her first kiss was back in the San Francisco Tournament (also Season 1 but Chapter 10). It's a shame Lady wasn't around. She would've enjoy the party and also plan on giving him a kiss. I'm a little sad that Dark Magician Girl, Magician's Valkyria and Queen's Knight didn't come out and give Thomas a Birthday Kiss too, while he and Emily were in his room. Speaking of which, I hope Emily doesn't go too adventurous on Thomas while massaging him. LOL! Happy 16th Birthday, Thomas. And Happy 75th Anniversary to the Railway Series. Before I go, if you're reading this, SF64Rules91, I know what deleted (Extended) scene I'd like to see next. You know on Season 3, when everyone went to bed except Thomas at the end of Chapter 76 and they came to see him and Spencer and were told about Percy's death at the end of Chapter 79? I'd like to read their side of those chapters. My prediction's Dark Magician Girl waking up from a nightmare, then went to talk to Thomas while in her nightgown, but found out he was gone and warned the others. That's the deleted (Extended) scene I'm interested to read next.
AaronCottrell97 chapter 21 . 7/30
Better late than never. A fine celebration.
John Wilkins chapter 20 . 7/17
Even in a powerful bond, there're sometimes gonna be some tough conversations between those two. Anyway, I have more to say after Season 5 finished, but I ran out of space in the Review Box. Since Thomas is 16, will Discord's kids get him his own Duel Runner and teach him how to drive it? Plus, have Emily as his private passenger? Knowing Gordon (annoyingly), he might name Thomas's Duel Runner, "The Shooting Star". Next, I hope Lady returns from her recovery. She and Emily are still yet to have their rematch. Finally, I don't know if you and Sodormatchmaker do DeviantART requests and I've already mentioned DaveMan1000 making Thomas in his duel clothes twice (1 with his jacket on and the other with his jacket as a cape), Atem, Anakin, swim-trunks and pajamas and Emily in her duel clothes (Season 3), Anzu, Anastasia twice (her royal clothes and her battle-tunic), new bikini (Season 4) and nightgown, but can you please draw Iris and Magician's Valkyria Norse Mode, to see what they're like?
AaronCottrell97 chapter 20 . 7/13
Short, but sweet.
jriddle41 chapter 19 . 4/10
Whoa... Aaron really went all out in this.
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