Reviews for The Greatest Gift
erica.phoenix16 chapter 12 . 3/5
Thanks for updating. :)
Starco4everr chapter 12 . 2/8
Awsome chapter
lordcornwalis chapter 12 . 2/7
I gotta say, I loved this chapter! Star and Marco are as cute and adorable as always, and Ludo, how can you not love the little guy! He's just trying so damn hard! Also the Emilio's part was fantastic, I literally laughed out loud at the tension between him and Marco. Finally, I had to chuckle during the spicier part of the story. Good to see Marco being so generous and giving Star a little of that "Downtown Leeroy Brown," if you know what I mean. Reminded me of my story where everyone's two favorite cuties just got to third base themselves! Fantastic work as always, Dude, and I as always I eagerly await more!
viceversa96 chapter 12 . 2/6
Another awesome chapter. The exploration of so many different characters is so much fun, and that steamy Starco bit was hilarious. It fits them perfectly.
Blackspiderman chapter 12 . 2/6
haven't reviewed this one as much as I wanted to but I wanted to say I've had a great time following this series, I love the story you've been able to tell with these characters. And for this one specifically I was so happy to see Ludo again :D Everybody needs a friend :D
Can't wait to see what's next :)
EDD17SP chapter 12 . 2/6
I don’t have anything super-specific to say other than that I really, really enjoyed this chapter and I wish so badly I could find a best friend/girlfriend like Star. I’m so jealous of Marco.
Oh, the diner. I keep thinking to myself that I want to write a one-shot story where Star and Marco just get lunch at a diner on a rainy day and absolutely nothing happens, written strictly for the atmosphere, but how the heck do you write a story where nothing happens?
Oh, and on that same note, I’m happy to see the Tom/Janna relationship is evolving.
Okay, I did have some specific things to say.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 11 . 1/22
I like this story. Keep it up. :)
Starco4everr chapter 11 . 12/30/2019
Awsome chapter. And I will always support your story till you finishenit
EDD17SP chapter 11 . 12/30/2019
I read this over on AO3 so I could enjoy the *score* (Wow, a fanfic with a music score! What a concept! Amazing!) but I’m leaving my review here because I don’t have an AO3 account. This is definitely my favorite chapter so far. I’m STILL jealous of how in-character everyone feels (especially Seahorse. That was beyond hilarious). The two simultaneous stories were both emotionally beautiful and sweet and I found myself wishing that it wouldn’t end.
Starco4everr chapter 10 . 12/15/2019
Awsome chapter as always
EDD17SP chapter 9 . 11/25/2019
There were too many clever things in this chapter to point all of them out, but, yeah, very clever! Glad to hear there are plenty more chapters planned! Gotta keep this fandom community alive, and keeping the fanfiction going is a great way to do it!
Starco4everr chapter 9 . 11/24/2019
Awsome chapter
RJWritingInk chapter 8 . 10/28/2019
I had a feeling that Star would be perfect working with kids. And it looks like Mariposa already considers her her big sister
Starco4everr chapter 8 . 10/28/2019
I really love Star. Great chapter
Blackspiderman chapter 8 . 10/28/2019
I can totally relate to the conflict of this one. Star & Marco are adorable together, thanks for writing such a wonderful fic :) don’t worry about the slower pace. You have to go at your pace, and if going slower means the quality stays high, so be it.
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