| Reviews for Fate: Salvation |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/10 A medival britian shirou fic that cuts the interesting fancy wording and the like to be rather easy to follow. Really like teacher shirou who has stayed true to himself but developed versatility and emotional maturity to the point where he can actually be a mentor, younger shirou seems like he would be shit at it. I also like how CHAD Shirou struggles against the voice in his head that LOSER reincarnated isekai protaganists have submitted to for generations that says "Good 'shota' good... say YES to loli. Say it now... Do it." Good job old man shirou, FIGHT THE LOLI. |
Uday Sra chapter 6 . 6/17 Awesome |
Primus2021 chapter 5 . 5/6 I'm imagining in my head that Halia looks like a hybrid of Lancer Parvarti, Lancer Medusa Lily and Caster Medea Lily. Looks like no matter what time period he's in Shirou is bound to gather a harem of pretty girls, lol. |
Gan315 chapter 6 . 4/15 Hey i just stumble this fanfic and i surprice that u are a fan of fate in time.I gotta say i love your writting stye and would like to see your twist of Shirou going back to mediaval britain.I can say that Shirou will invatably become king alone side with Athuria as Queen.I can see that Shirou will say he made a terrible king but his will soon reliaze that he have the capabalities as one and also he already change actions,bonds with the knights and new friends,his knowledge of the future,blacksmithing,architection,experiance of his will also be Worthy of caliburn which can create potential path.I hope this fic update faster soon. Besides Shirou being king ruling with Arthuria as queen is better that rulling alone but its up to u how u write it. |
Markus Ramikin chapter 1 . 4/9 Someone chuckles: 14 times Someone laughs: 6 times Someone "couldn't help but" do something (usually chuckle or laugh): 10 times You need to broaden your arsenal a bit... |
The Ancient Irish Viking chapter 6 . 4/1 i love how you write, and to be honest i dont think it really needs much, if any, changing |
Louis chapter 6 . 3/21 Beautiful work so far my dude. Hope you come back to writing this and your crossovers. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2019 Please continue |
TeotakuFantasia chapter 6 . 12/16/2019 I reread this story and am still waiting for the next chapter |
surviversp chapter 6 . 12/10/2019 Thank you for the enjoyable story so far. I've loved their interactions and relationship growth so far. I'm looking forward to more of this story whenever your schedule allows. |
Project Pseudonym chapter 4 . 12/5/2019 Great story! I, too, am a fan of Fate In Time by Parcasious. It's good to see another fan is trying his hand at writing. I do feel that the pace of the story is bit too fast as with your time skips. As for this chapter, Shirou's use of his trump card, reality marble should've cost him more energy. Even if he's now working with functional magic circuits and is in age where mana flows more freely, the cost of UBW is not something he can easily shrug off. |
jim anime chapter 4 . 12/4/2019 No, not is a satisfactory fight your use of Caladbolg, a Rank A NP, for open a door is the mayor downgrade I see for this NP and in the proper figth Shiro was downpowered like a noob just like he is in the novel he use only the basic of his magecraft and then after one hit he use UBW because yes, not use the ability to copy the skill of his weapons like in his two figth with Herakles, not use a NP/MC anti inmortals other thing is the use of Rho Aias and Enkidu the first lose 3 capes is a great joke because is the equivalent of break 3 fortress wall of Gilgamesh make this with a rain of NP over Shiro in UBW, Cu Culahin make this with Alternative Gae Bolg, Alter Saber make this with Excalibur Morgan over a mild trace Rho Aias in Heavens Feel and for Enkidu if Shiro use Enkidu is for he figth Gilgamesh like UBW or saw Gilgamesh fougth and use Enkidu and no make sense if this is the situation he charge to figth with a Apostol only with K&B, a NP rank C- and C/B in front of beast and magic and not a simple MC/Swords he use because his magnetic skills, only for the use of Enkidu is a wasted too because Enkidu its a anti-divine weapon in fornt of a Apostol without divinity Enkidu is fall of its prime. Other thing the proyections of Shiro dind't vanish if he woldn¡t make to do, this is show in the route of HF and Stay Night |
Tomon chapter 6 . 12/4/2019 So far an excellent tale and I for one enjoy your more technical description of both magic and fighting technique. Honestly the only complain I may have is the lack of the 'Next ' button at the end of this chapter, but that's the usual problem with superb stories as yours. Us, readers, always want more of them ;-) Really amazing job so far on all account be it relationship between our main character, their own development or even other side characters old and new. I wonder if you're gonna touch the time-travel paradox at some point, given that if Shirou succeed at his quest to give Arturia the future she deserves, then his younger (future) self shouldn't be able to summon her as it happened, thus erasing the reason for him wishing for his time travel to happen :) But mostly I'm truly looking forward to the next chapter ;-) |
DemonRaily chapter 6 . 11/9/2019 I found the recommendation for this story in your newer fanfiction and I am really glad I took my time to read it. So far I find it genuinely better than fate in time that served as one of its inspirations. Despite some time passing since the last update I still hope one day to see more of this story. |
Alucard1992 chapter 6 . 11/5/2019 I love it! More! |