Reviews for The Itsy Bitsy Spider
GhostlyCaryler123 chapter 1 . 6/23
I am actually writing a series that is called The Family of Hero’s. First I am concentrating on Blaze’s storyline, he is adopted son to Tony and Pepper and adoptive younger brother to Morgan, Harley and Peter. Harley and Peter are biological sons to Tony and Pepper. Blazes real parents are Aphrodite and Hermès and is actually a element than a godling, his full name is Blaze Harold Stark, Harold is Happy’s real name.

But your story actually gave me idea for my 6 new ones, 3 boys and 3 girls. The ages are 14 to 16. They were were adopted by Hydra for experiments, they were or are in the same position as Peter in your story, being shrunken down and giving bug or insect DNA. The 2 14 years olds gave spider DNA, they will become friends with Peter, the boy has the wolf spider DNA while the girl has Black Widow DNA, having Natasha and Steve adopting her, yes I ship them even though it is dead but I don’t care, those two maybe love interests. The 2 15 year olds, the girl has Ladybug DNA and the boy has Grasshopper DNA, there is no love interest here because I am planning on that the Grasshopper boy is gay and the Ladybug girl isn’t ready for a relationship. For the two oldest, the 16 year’s olds, the boy has Dragonfly DNA while the girl has Monarch Butterfly DNA, they will be girlfriend and boyfriend. Hooked up while at Hydra.

Names for these are

Ruby14
Athena16
Valentina15

Jasper15
Preston14
Tyson -16
Selina 3 chapter 30 . 4/27
I love this fic! You’re a great writer!
sillysammijo chapter 30 . 12/1/2019
Okay this was adorable! It was a great read and very original! Loved it!
whumpangstfluffrepeat chapter 30 . 11/14/2019
AWWWWW that ending...
I love this story SO much! Awesome work! I’m glad I got to it just after you finished, though, because otherwise I would have to WAIT for updates! Instead I got to binge-read the whole thing. :D Can’t wait for your next fic!
MC9000MK1 chapter 30 . 10/11/2019
ty for did fix I feel bubbly now
Phantom Gravity Warriors chapter 30 . 10/7/2019
This was the best story I've ever read in a LONG while. thank you, and keep up the good- no AMAZING! Work!
poohbear123 chapter 30 . 9/14/2019
This was amazing. please do another story with Peter getting deaged and Tony having to take care of him. They are so cute as father and son.
skydancer121 chapter 30 . 9/14/2019
*squeals in delight* Such a happy ending!
Spideyfangirl123 chapter 29 . 9/13/2019
PETERRRRRR! Nuuuuuu! :(
Can you please make more chapters instead of just one more? This is very intresting!
skydancer121 chapter 29 . 9/11/2019
My heart: Oh noooooo!
My head: Oh yesssssss!
In unison: Keep writing!
poohbear123 chapter 29 . 9/10/2019
Oh no poor Peter. Tony better hurry if he is going to save Peter.
CharlieLittle chapter 29 . 9/10/2019
nooooooooooo Peter! you can't do this to himor to us- .. what a cliffhanger.. make him safe again! and to make up for these cliffhanger I'm pleading for the biggest Tony hug ever written when everything else is said and done and Peter is safe, big and most importantly back with his 'family' where he belongs!
I.D.'s Fantasy chapter 29 . 9/10/2019
Oof. All of the suspense. Keep up the good work!
skydancer121 chapter 28 . 9/7/2019
Yes, Peter. Beg and maybe Hammer will let you out or at least buy you some time for Tony to come save you. Don't give up!

I love this so much!
MazikeenWolf chapter 28 . 9/7/2019
pouts you're killing me! love this chapter cant wait for tony to get these assholes. but why do I have a feeling Hammer is gonna help Peter? I hope so
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