| Reviews for Naruto: The Missing Phenex |
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Guest chapter 4 . 7/5 Please continue to update this story |
Redlinner chapter 4 . 6/16 Yo I want know if you are alive or not... because I like this fiction and I'm impatient to have the follow chapters. |
Jhon Fredy bermu chapter 4 . 6/1 Cuando vas a actualizar es siguiente capítulo |
sandmanwake chapter 4 . 5/19 Human magic use equations. Devil magic just rely on imagination. |
Redlinner chapter 4 . 4/28 Yo Good story... but and the next chap? When is it add? We want the following. Who will be the Naruto Romance? Sakura? Tsunade? Hinata? Hanabi? Inuzuka Hana? Ichiraku Ayame? Tenten? Rias? Akeno? Sona? Tsubaki? Koneko? Kuroka? What the the reaction of Yasaka to Kurama? Good work and good luck |
killer.naruto57 chapter 4 . 4/29 Are you going to update because I'm not gonna lie this is pretty good |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/31 It's almost like the other fanfic naruto is nearly emo and you should have place him in a jungle or a rain forest instead of the Vatican and make him different |
SabakunoYokho chapter 4 . 1/22 Good fiction. But I have a question ? Do you have a new chapter expected? a suite? When? We guess you plan a road with Sakura and Tsunade, maybe Rias. but who are the futur peerage members? Shinobi or a member of DxD dimension? Can we suggest ideas? or protagonist from other anime? (Kenichi the Mightiest Disciple, Fairy Tail, Toaru majutsu no railgun, gunslinger girl, Sekirei, ...) King : Naruto Queen : Tsunade Rook : Lee/Gaï ? (a only one. Why ? because the illusion of sunset of young ! Minute man. Why Naruto don't use Ura Haremu no jutsu, Bishonen version, on Issei? Or the Yound Power? Ah I know. Overkill. But it will so fun.) Rook : Bishop : Sakura Bishop : Ravel Knight : Xenovia ? Knight : Yugao or Erza Scarlet or Knightwalker because she is a red ? Pawn : Kunou? (a little and cutie fox girl to be a little sister moe? why not) Pawn : Anko ? (for trauma Issei. A big breast Kunoichi who love torture little perverts) Pawn : Hinata or Hanabi. The pawn type is most appropriate for CQC experts to adapt at the opponent and they are not also powerful than Sakura and not suitable to be just Knight or Rook. Pawn : Misaka Mikoto (To aru majutsu no index and a Tsundere) Pawn : Tohsaka Rin (Fate Stay Night and The Tsun-tsun trolled by Zelrecht... once again) Pawn : Emiya Kuro/Illyasviel (Fate Kaleid Prisma) Pawn : Harry Potter.(Why? because it will be fun a saviour turned devil by an other saviour who be devil.) Pawn : What do you think of my suggestions? you are free to inspire or not. But we will have a new chap of the Missing Phenex. Please ! |
mastercheif1229 chapter 4 . 1/7 Absolutely incredible story so far! I hope you update this story at some point! |
BoredKing chapter 4 . 11/29/2019 Did he just remove Ddraig from Issei? Or maybe seriously hurt Ddraig? |
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 11/20/2019 Sigue |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/14/2019 You make Rias look like an idiot, like every other damn author in this genre. While I respect people's choices in the matter of where they take their stories and whom they pair characters up with, I hate shit that's unbelievable, especially if it's a series I like and someone gets stupid just to make someone look bad, it's like watching Disney and Warner Brothers butcher Marvel and DC, both of which I grew up on and absolutely HATE every movie of these comics ever made. Rias Gremory is neither weak nor stupid, in fact, you are erroneous in your portrayal of how much stronger Naruto's people are to the Devils, Naruto at full power can level maybe a large ninja village like Konoha (which by the way is MAYBE as big as a SMALL American city), Sirzechs can wipe out entire continents just releasing his power, not even launching an attack just simply letting his power out in a display that says "I'm Pissed", this is an irrefutable fact and if you want to argue with me, I suggest you read the Light Novel, and Rias herself when she unleashed her powers, nearly destroyed a pocket dimension (Like what Naruto and Sasuke STRUGGLED to survive in), again, this was Rias throwing a damn tantrum proving she's FAR stronger than even Naruto and Sasuke, again, this is proof, you can watch the anime and listen to Sona say "She's going to tear the dimension apart if she keeps going!" (Battle with Loki). Rias is also EXTREMELY intelligent, it was HER planning that allowed them to take on Riser's more experienced Peerage, I doubt she would be pleased to find out Issei viewed her as an object, in canon its different because everyone can clearly see, despite his perversions, Issei has a heart of gold, but here you've clearly portrayed him as greedy like Riser, in this situation, I doubt Rias would be as amused as she is in canon. Look, I don't care if you don't want to pair him with Rias, though I think it's stupid if you don't, but expect me to call out when you make something look completely outlandish, the only senseless bashing I tolerate is Sasuke, because in my eyes, he NEVER earned redemption, don't give a shit what Kishimoto says, the fucker didn't even raise his own daughter, so he's garbage that can be bashed to the extreme for all I care and Itachi is a murderous traitor, don't give a damn about his EXCUSE, he could have killed the elders instead of his family, but most of the DxD cast don't deserve relentless bashing, not even Riser, he deserves it at the beginning but not later on, Rizevim can be bashed, Euclid can be bashed, Zekram Bael and Lord Bael can be bashed, though I will admit I did like the feud with the Gremory, that was believable. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2019 Please update the stroy he is one of the bast |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2019 Please update the story this story is one of the best |
fffc34hf668ggbb chapter 4 . 10/19/2019 yeah update soon plss,and just like you I really hate that prick shitty head pervertd dragon vessel so much |