Yo I’ve seen people ship with a 13 year age difference so I see this as perfectly fine and in my mind he’s around 29 in the actual rwby show or at latest 32 still not a very good age but as you said another taboo broken so yeah also coolio

Hoooo Boy! This was a real doozy. I really liked to read this entire book in a go. But now I'm sad that it's over. It's short but really sweet. It makes up for it. Thanks for the good read!

are you going to make a sequel?

Well that was just forced stupidity. Even ruby does not think she can fight 5k people. Peace out

See, here's the thing - you wrote a fic for a rarepair ship with a small, but dedicated fan base. You wrote it in a way that made sure to address the touchy parts, like the age difference, and that also left it good for those who are not quite fans of it. And most of all, you wrote it great. Enjoyable. Suspenseful. Filling. With just a touch of "Damn. It's actually over. There will be no more of it. I will have to get used to the withdrawal for a while." mixed in for the extra points.

Basically-

10/10 would read more

A glyph wouldn't stop Moonslice for much.

Yang should still have her aura tanking a huge blow.
Weiss's glyph would shatter basically immediately upon contact, even if she poured all her aura into it. It tore through Yang's aura AND arm once and that was just when it was regularly charged.

This is a supercharged one on the likes of vaporizing that spider droid.

It started out great and ended as spectacular! Thanks for the fic! Kudos!

As a member of the Rosewick shippers, I really love this. Natural romance and chemistry, tense story, characters acting in-character - a quality fic, all in all.

And to be honest, this is the first time I've seen someone use mathematical equations to prove a good point nobody considers - that age gaps are one of the smallest concerns when it comes to who Huntsmen and Huntresses get in relationships with.

All in all, this was quality content. One of the best examples of what a good fix can do even if it risks it's from a majority of a community.

I said it once and I'll say it again; This is the best RWBY fanfic I've ever read! Kudos for this!

dam i lover this storu

damn i love this story i binged the whole thing its so well written this is a instant double favourite and follow

Yep! Best RWBY fanfic I've ever read! Kudos!

Another awesome chapter! Kudos!

Neo with the whole make it wierd thing lol

I can't believe they finally broke out of there only to go back in! Arg! The tension is at its peak! I can't wait to see what Rosewick's plan will be to save Neo. Maybe they'll have an unexpected helping hand other than Blanche? Can't wait for the next one!