Reviews for Reaction time (All the good names are taken (sigh))
Bobbus the great chapter 5 . 7/11
When will the next story will arrive?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/2
Wow, an unnecessary chapter and to be an interlude that could have just been skipped over, how original.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
Wow, a swear jar, how unoriginal and retarded. Also, three bucks for swear (when it was another Jaune swearing), man ain't Ruby a no good greed, thieving little bitch. A dumb little bitch... Like you.
Thordak1991 chapter 5 . 6/24
Couldld you do a army of two devils cartel chapter. Where Jaune is alpha and Ren is bravo
Guest chapter 5 . 6/17
Maybe do The Rock by Michael Bay? Major Hummel is a terrific tragic character.
Qriiz chapter 1 . 6/12
I'm not going to say anything about the plot holes in the movie itself.
1. Very funny how everyone immediately dismiss Pyrrha's betrayal in here.
2. Thinking their soldiers as expendable might sound heartless, evil, etc. but that is the only healthy way to cope with their position. A General or military leader like Ozpin that didn't think so would be in asylum or retirement. Otherwise, it would mean that someone is completely aware that their actions/inactions/mistakes directly/indirectly killed hundreds, thousands (or in Ozpin's case) millions of people and still remain functional and capable of smilling. You want to stay as far away as possible from that kind of people, mate.
Fyr RedNight chapter 5 . 6/11
Good work on this chapter.
sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 5/14
Would you do jaune as Lucifer
Guest chapter 5 . 5/14
Great chapter, while I enjoy Brosnan's Bond, he doesn't compare to the classic Connery or Craig's more grounded style. I think doing Casino Royale would be a nice juxtaposition to this later. Give the viewers a good shock at how different it is despite being the same universe, technically.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
Can you do the mist plz i want to see there react to the ending
Zathol chapter 5 . 5/9
Ah got to enjoy all the spy gadgets and interesting tech one can have. Maybe it could inspire a few things for those watching. I mean I always thought that with Nora's weapon that she would have a bag full of grenades just because. The hunters of the series always look under equipped to me. I mean they all really only have is their weapons and cloths which most don't look durable enough to survive a jaunt through the forest. I mean Weiss outfit should have went from white to dirt after the initiation.

Shame that Sienna and James are both so focused on what the tech can do for their sides. Instead of trying to take better stances. Been a bit since I read the first chapter but I do recall the world becoming a new world in some way. They should try to think what that means for their own organizations. Maybe they will figure it along the way.

I'm interested in the conversations to come dealing with the feelings. Also curious to learn a bit more about Nora and Velvet's and their own reasoning. Specifically Nora as it's rare when an author separates her and Ren from a romantic relation. Points for you for that.

Other then Jaune just being himself, what did he do to charm Nora and Velvet. Pyrrha and Ruby is a bit more straight forward without thinking of personal moments as they are naturally close.

Also interesting to see the others interactions through the chapter as well. Seeing a bit more about themselves. Even got to see small peak into Willows interest I think. It looked like it was implied she has a thing for James yet the man probably is none the wiser and has eyes for Glynda despite being turned down. Shame.

A little bit of jealousy from Raven. A little bit of trauma for Yang and Ruby seeing that which no child wishes to see their parents doing the nasty. Even a potential redo on the birds and the bees for them in the future. Ouch.

Not really to into the bond series from any era but I think you chose one that gave a little bit of everything for everyone to enjoy here and there.

I liked to think that the huntsmen in training learned a bit about whats expected of them in their career choice.

Thanks for the chapter and hard work!
RustKnight chapter 5 . 5/7
Maybe it's just me but the sanctimonious audience members are becoming very grating.

It seems Qrow, Sun, and Neptune can't get a reaction in without being getting lectured by others.
sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 5/5
You should do the umbrella academy
MrBatman123086 chapter 5 . 5/5
i haven't seen anybody make one with jaune as knocking master jiro from toriko yet and that is what i really hope for
The Exiled Darkness chapter 5 . 5/4
Ahh, James Bond movies really are nice aren’t they? If I could make a suggestion, what about the MCU’s Iron Man? The first one because it honestly is the best one.
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