i was so reluctant to read this, mainly because of the story being a modern au, but I loved it so much! thank you for writing it, it was an amazing experiencei love your work, and i’m looking forward to seeing more in the future

Great story i loved it

This was a delight. Seriously, I don’t typically dig modernized AUs, but this one was great. You have a way of verbalizing things that are difficult to put into words. There was just so much in this fic relationally that was so so good. I wish there had been more Team Mustang time, but I understand why there wasn’t lol. You could go so many directions with this fic, and you’ve got future opportunities for spin offs that would also be amazing and my heart hopes for more ;D This was so much fun, thank you.

“Our dad is going to be mad.”

Oh, yes, he is.

8C nonoNO

Why is this happening?! D:

Ed and Al are at least as competent as Mustang in the kitchen xD

Edo and Al are going to be thrilled c:

So the way you describe wanting to act a certain way, but knowing your behavior up to that point doesn’t allow for it, is perfect. Like, putting words to a hard-to-describe feeling.

It’s okay, Mama Hawk is here ;-;

But I’m dying and really excited that the next chapter is one click away xD

WHERE ARE YOU, MUSTANG?!

Edo is such a stubborn kid xD

Al’s right, it’s okay to talk about your feelings.

Hughes (and the way you write him) is a gift. Bless that man.

;_;

I love your portrayal of these characters in this situation. It’s so perfect.

And Ed would be the first to insert himself into some sort of investigation lol

Al: Ed’s upset and these kids are being mean and idk what to do. Less important, there was also a stalker, k thanks bye.

Priorities, kiddo xD

Mustang is such a good, awkward dad xD I just love how he sits there and overthinks everything.

And Ed. Stubborn, obnoxious, pouty Ed is hilarious, and the way he caves to Al’s every whim.

And THE MYSTERY. I need to know this backstory.