My favorite chara? Of course Naruto

Can't wait to read more

kakashi

when is the sequel man

yo when s the next chapter

When the sequel

Read the two chapters did not like your self insert at all she is fucking annoying as shit

It is a good story, but the second chapter lacked reaction midway and at the end. Also, please remove that Violet character, he reactions and pretty much everything she does is annoying. Leave only the Naruto characters present, they are the only one we readers have interest in. Your OC is ruining your story, so I hope you continue with the story.

Near the end of the showing, you should’ve gave more reactions, like the genin(all but the Sand trio, Shikamaru, choji, Hinata and maybe Kiba) could all start hating Naruto screaming like a certain banshee we all know, but then the jonin could calm them down or Naruto gets up and runs, while the host Voliot(or however it’s spelt) could let him vanish into another area that he hide from them, then Hina-chan could surprise everyone by actually speaking up instead of being miss shy-hyuga by claiming Naruto is not the Fox, otherwise the village would have more than pranks to worry about

Also try updating at least once a month to two months at the latest for these stories styles, people love them

This was really good better than a few others out there I hope you continue it

My favorite character is Naruto Uzumaki

Why can i see Violet suddenly T-Posing and asserting her dominance over everyone?

Naruto, Shikamaru and Gaara are my faves. Please continue the fanfiction. It's really good!

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My favorite character is Kakashi!