I prefer Namine being with Roxas not Riku.

Shipping Namine with her abuser? Fucking yikes

ok there's things to say about this chapter. Ok so this is the end of the chapter and I actually want to see more of it so thank you for making this story and I can't wait to see more what Masters of Master and our awesome Keyblade gang are gonna do. Even though you said that it's gonna be a while for a sequel to The Time In Between and you're working on another story I'm still gonna wait for the sequel to The Time In Between, and speaking of, I like the romantic moments you have for the characters and couple I shipped like Sora and Kairi, Aqua and Terra, Xion and Roxas, Riku and Namine, and Aerith and Zack along with Cloud and Tifa in the previous chapter. Thanks for making this story, hope to see more

Beautiful... Love the romantic scenes that many of the characters received. It would've been nice to see more like it in a Kingdom Hearts game instead of Nomura's tendency to beat around the bush. At least we have great fanfiction writers who are willing to oblige.

Joshua still being a crafty prick, as usual. What else can one say about a boy who once tried to obliterate his own world. About the pure lights... Disney fans can tell you just how tough they are. Unlike earlier female damsels like Cinderella and Aurora, the newer gals are gutsy and strong, possibly more so than their male co-stars.

Something tells me even you old works are still better than most of the stuff people post here. Give yourself some credit.

Nice chaotic fight scene, and yet it still seems the true conclusion is a far way off. Seems like you're pulling a leaf out of Nomura's book by leaving the audience with a cliffhanger, and an epilogue that will most likely raise more questions than answers... I LOVE IT!

Hey bro glad you could reupload. And there's gonna be another story after this? Can't wait, I'd like to see some Zack and Aerith moments hehe

And, we're coming down to the finish. Seems a tiny bit rushed, but still well-written.

No one would fault you for being busy, though it was nice of you to drop a line to readers.

Such a nice story! I can't believe you haven't gotten more support.

Joshua is one thing, though I'm inclined to think his nihilistic nature would make it difficult to deal with him. Mr. Hanekoma seems more likely to give answers, though Riku and Sora never met him.

Another fine chapter. Nothing to complain about. :D

Actualy, Rapunzel's Sundrop powers can be used offensively. Not to mention she has a trick called the "Hurt Incantation" that turns her hair black and causes everything around her to whither and decay. She probably would've been the hardest to catch.

Nice, good to see the two former villains still have their powers. Elrena always did seem rather distant, but how that turned to sheer malice is the real question. As Larxene, she was always callous and sadistic towards enemies, while being sarcastic around allies, and cruel to intended victims... Ironically, and perhaps fortunately, the people who suffered most have no memory of most of it, save Namine.

dude I hope you have a plan I liked it that the Foretellers actually turned to the side of good. Hopefully they'll still listen

whoa dude what happen? I was reading chapter 19 where Sora and the gang are fighting Luxu and Vanitas and suddenly chapter 19 is gone? Are you re-editing the chapter? It's good as it is