Loving this story and can't wait for more!

I'm glad for your new baby yay! i really hope to be a girl!

so this chapter is so sweet and can't wait for the party.
i hope see soon

Just read this story no stop. It is so amazing! I can't wait until he proposes, the wedding, the baby girl. I'm so excited for the rest of this story!

This is one of my favorite eo fics. Please update.

This was so cute oh my gosh

First things first, before I write my review, please accept my condolences on the loss of your father in law. I'm sure moving to a new house is a bit of an adjustment, but we do what we need to for family. Also, many congratulations on your pregnancy! I know you'll welcome any new addition, but I share your hope that you have a little girl to round out your family. Also, it was nice to hear an update on your schooling as well. With all this going on in your life, it's understandable while fanfiction has taken a backseat. I've never once thought you had abandoned this, merely figured that as usual, there were other priorities that were more important.

Now - as for this chapter - it was amazing! I kind of figured Olivia wasn't going to be able to adhere to her 'no sex' rule, though it did amuse me greatly that she wasn't even able to get beyond the first night of having everyone in the condo. Though I suppose sharing a shower with Elliot and having him wash her hair and massage her scalp like that proved to be quite the distraction. I can understand given Olivia's current condition that shower sex isn't as feasible as it once was, she needs the comfort of their bed. Still, I loved their playful banter regarding just how loud she could be, and whether or not it would be logical for them to go to a hotel.

Then, when Elliot was making loved to her, as always, I love how he put her needs first. Just like with Olivia's reflections of the many times he would pleasure her with just his mouth, heedless to his own needs, only for her to wake up in the middle of the night needing him inside her, was such a hot sequence to read. I also like how she stressed a scenario like that wasn't possible and she needed him completely NOW, because she had to work in the morning.

When they were satiated, I had to smile at Olivia's comment about needing to clean up again. I know for the longest time she was self conscious about what happened with her body in regard to Elliot and her orgasms, but it seems she's embraced it now. I also love Elliot's promise that he would never lie to her. This was a very hot and steamy chapter, and I'm curious as to what will happen in the morning...whether or not they were somehow heard by anyone, and how Olivia will react to that if that is the case. Great writing as always, and I look forward to reading more whenever you find time to post it!

enjoying

Glad you’re back! This chapter was great as always! Looking forward to more

Our really many things happening in your life. My inquiries for your father-in-law. And congratulations to you on the baby. Success in your studies. And when possible you can write u and I'll be here to read, after all this story is still engaging. Stay Safe

Sorry for your loss and CONGRATULATIONS! Life is crazy! Good luck with nursing school! Thank you for updating! Love this story!

Awesome job

Excellent work can't wait for more

Please please please update!

can you do some chapters with liv and Elliot (or liv herself) talking to eli about how he feels about the baby and then getting eli to bond with the baby and get him more involved with her pregnancy because after reading the last chapters eli really is detached

great story btw! I hope you update soon

I like this story! I love the pace of it. You're doing a good job!