Amazing

Definitely loved how Neji got put in his place

You know, you seem to have a tendency to switch narutos name for natsus

I agree with a few other reviewers on here. The story has a good concept, but could definitely benefit from a Beta to pick up the mistakes that take the reader out of the story flow to figure out what you are trying to say in the text. I think if you get someone to take on this role this story could be excellent and it would allow you to progress as a writer too.

Adorable

Great chapter I just wanted to alert you on that instead they where tailored to his small hands you have written to was Taylor to his small hands

Nice

For jutsu there are a lot of anime to steal from. Question is whether or not you want wide area affects, mid-range or precision techniques?

Hah! I hope he pulls pranks on the perve as penance. That just sounds fun.

Hm, I suppose that is certainly a 'calmer' way to introduce Jiraiya and Naruto. Cute, too.

damn not reading it, sorry nice story but i think i have some hate for sasuke XD

I love it! I love the new techniques he has learned and his and kukiko’s relationship is so cute.

Hm, so is that Naruto's famous 'luck' showing up here with the appearance of the missing nin? Or just happenstance for the story? Very nice way to remind them to keep on their toes.

Nice

Funny