Reviews for Mesmerized
toriebluebelle67 chapter 1 . 8/9
and the fact he even helps her with her hair and twists it A husband
toriebluebelle67 chapter 1 . 8/9
this one shot was so fucking cute. the way you describe all his emotions and what he likes about her and give examples of when he demonstrates that is just so amazing. you're such a great writer
Beautifultrash chapter 2 . 7/8
This was totally worth the wait! I loved every single bit of it, the only thing that left me disappointed was that it ended lol. You're an amazing writer thank you so much!
StrangeRealidade chapter 2 . 4/18
What can I say, this is perfect. I love your writing and your way with words, I love the tenderness with which your described their relationship. Perfect! Keep writing and gifting us with more Chanry goodness
Supbea chapter 2 . 10/2/2019
Oh goodness, i have no words, i really loved this, the pining! The lingering looks! Thirst trap Henry Hart is a delight! (Charlotte being a bossy top is the only thing that matters.) And it's a thing i didn't even know i wanted, oh my days, i loved this so very much.

I really loved all the heart you put into this, like it flows so well, and the dialogue is stellar. Jasper is MVP for sure.

Thank you so much for sharing
wrathfuldreamhare chapter 2 . 6/16/2019
This. Was. So. CUTE! A fantastic companion to Charlotte's POV. They're so adorable, awesome story!
Pamme chapter 2 . 6/8/2019
OHHH MYYYY GOOOOOD
FUCKING LIKE ME SOOOO MUCH
JESÚS thanks for write this totally thank you
You must write more fics like this
Shonashee chapter 2 . 5/29/2019
I read Distraction like a year and a half ago and I was so excited to see you made a sequel from Henry's POV! Like last time, you perfectly captured the development of the crush, and it was even more hilarious because as much of a mess Charlotte may be, Henry is so much worse. From the first moment with the sniffing I was totally drawn in. I actually had to put my phone down at a couple of points because I could feel the embarrassment. And the scene with all the villains had me actually crying from laughter. Everything about this was iconic. I don't know if you'll keep writing for this fandom, but I was really excited to see you were back, and I'm in love with practically everything you write.
Chenry5ever chapter 2 . 5/28/2019
So I realized that there was a sequel to your other story, and I can't tell you how happy I was to read it. I don't know how you did it but you absolutely outdid yourself and made another beautiful story. I want to thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. Thank you.
QTFics chapter 2 . 5/21/2019
Yeah I'm so happy you made a follow up! It was worth the wait!
NoReasonJstBored chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
So you are just Amazing Amazing huh? Girl when I tell you that this was Fantastic? Fantastic! I loved it and it was everything I never knew I needed. It was everything I wanted. Your writing style is very unique and I loved the characterization in this. 10 out of 10 would recommend!
Godslittlewoman018 chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
Thank you for the sequel! It was incredible and well written. You got Charlotte and Henry's characters and personalities down. I love Ray and Jasper in this. They add so much great humor. Loved Shwoz. Every bit of it was beautiful. I hope you write more Chenry stories. It was worth the wait and so worth reading. Keep up the good work!
trauzlly chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
Girrrrrrrrrrrl! Let me tell you I screamed when I saw that you posted a new story and I screamed even louder when I saw that it was just like 'Distraction' but in Henry's point of view (good thing I was home alone! lol)

Man it was a joy to read this from Henry's point of view I laughed so hard with all his awkward moments just as much as I laughed with 'Distraction'

I freaking died at Henry comment about being on his back (girl I totally thought that Henry like Powerful Women in control, specifically Charlottelet me just thank you for writting this beautiful masterpiece! They way you write Charlotte's and Henry's characterization is perfect. You are such an amazing writer. Man your stories are a blessing to this fandom and I can already say imma be reading this so many times (just as much as I read 'Distraction' because its sooooooooo good!)

I really hope you keep writting stories for Chenry because I really do love them. And take your time writing I will be here waiting to see what you come up with next even if it takes years.

You are the best! Thanks again for this story!