| Reviews for A Magical Ending |
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   Proud Harmonian chapter 1 . 5/15 Good chapter. Some very nice battle sequences. I liked how adorable Dany and Jon were together. Also, at the end how they were wonderful parents. I am glad Missandei lived. I think her murder really broke Dany with how cruel and pointless it was. She was one of the few people that did not betray her. Still I agree those two idiots D&D ruined Season 8 with how they kill all those seasons of character development for some sense of drama and to subvert expectations. I do hope you could include Game of Thrones in your main story, A New Path , start from season one to see where you could take from there. Keep up the good work. |
| HP FAN chapter 1 . 4/22 My first HPGOT fanfic. I never watch the end of got. Hated how they portrayed D. Your ending is glorious. Thank you. IT would be great if you wrote a story where verve youngest did not have to commit suicide after seeing his wife to be blown up. I really liked them both. They do not even have to marry just survive. And Harry can take that crazy gene out of his genome so he and his future kids can be happy and stay sane. Thanks for a real treat. |
| Danterevan chapter 1 . 3/2 Ah my dude I love you so much I don’t need to read yet to leave a positive review Been my favourite FF writer for a decade now keep them coming so happy your going into GOT gonna be amazing |
| orionastro chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Very good story |
| Gouravsilentreader chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 Awesome story Love it |
| Cade2065 chapter 1 . 8/22/2019 I don't know why, but Gary-Stu stories always make me cringe. |
| Stonerguy420 chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 This was kinda corny |
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 6/4/2019 great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
| Pennieyoung chapter 1 . 6/1/2019 Great story, love this ending so much more :) |
| Nemhain2009 chapter 1 . 5/30/2019 Enjoyed reading your story! |
| alec-potter chapter 1 . 5/28/2019 Nice chapter. I gave up on FB more than 5 years back, so get deprived of your cool stuff :( Nevertheless, it was a good fic even if I don't gen like Jon. Surprised that you didn't make it into a Harem but it's nice still. Hope you get motivated to write a complete retell of GoT with probably Robb or Jamie or Oberyn as the main character. Keep writing. |
| Hadrian Lannister chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 I have applied to joining your facebook group. Please accept as soon as possible. |
| satene chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 Wow, amazing! I really love this ending. Actually, I would have prefered quite a lot of endings to what actually happened. But your story is perfect! Thank you! |
| anarion87 chapter 1 . 5/24/2019 nice story |
| naruto chapter 1 . 5/21/2019 great chapter keep it up |
