Creative and very original. Very enjoyable. The grammar was a little rough in a couple of spots but wasn't anything major. The happy ending was greatly appreciated. Also appreciated was a limited amount of angst.

Thanks for sharing!

Another awesome story. Thank you!

This is sweet, I really enjoyed it.

Great feral Lucifer

This is a very sweet story! I really loved it and fan girled over it. I absolutely loved the ending. It was really sweet!

Beautifully done!

Damn dude, that ending nearly made me cry

I absolutely adore you showing a stressed Luficer in that pre-verbal state. All that primitive but so very clear communication works perfectly. The other characters react true to form. Very in character. Well done!

More? *carrots and lettuces to feed your plot bunnies*

Nice story. Also, a good explanation for how Lucifer could get out of his duties in Hell when he couldn't before. Maybe he and the other (un) fallen angels could take shifts ruling hell from now on, maybe starting after Chloe eventually dies? And perhaps they can start rehabilitation of human souls there now as well? Duma and the others open up a lot of possibilities.

Loved it!

Yeah, this was awesome!

Amazing story, I loved it. The overprotective wolf-cat-bird Devil was so cute. I also enjoyed the way Mazikeen acts, how Trixie is so accepting Lucifer and the end with the other fallen angel ruling Hell.

awww sooooo cuuttee

YESSSSSSS! ( I really have to stop reading fics when I’m not caught up yet, but this one was amazing) loved how Lucifer saved them, Chloe’s prayers, and of course how Trixie proves her mettle.
Well, really, the whole thing was perfect, including that great ending with Duma. Thanks for the lovelies!