I never yet managed to save New Manchester... This was very moving, I shed a tear.

I really like your writing, its poignant!

Nice work! I particularly liked the scouts eager anticipation as they approached Legacy. The sombre end of them burying their saviours was very good too.

One typo: “The city had just survived it's first blizzard” “its”

RIP Dear scientists, your legacy will live on in the city of New Manchester.